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Hopeful_Ink_Hoof


[He/Him] Just a writer who likes MLP and hopes to make a living off it: https://ko-fi.com/ink_hoof

Comments ( 27 )

Not a pairing I would have expected, but you made me believe in it! Nice job :twilightsmile:

Birb Bug Banging?

The door had been to Yona's room, but it was Sandbar who stepped out. He stopped, eyes wide as he caught sight of her.

Can you make a sequel with Sandbar and Yona please?

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No promises, but I'm not opposed to it.

Congratulations on the feature, and this definitely earned it. You managed to make a very under utilised ship both very believable and flowing. Your portrayal of the relationship as if it was a longtime coming, at least on Ocellus' end, makes me want a prequel just as much as a sequel.

Very well done, well done indeed.

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Well, while it's not actually connected, the idea was inspired by (and requested in the comments of) When Haggling, Bring a Griffon. So, you could sort of consider that an unofficial prequel, or this an unofficial sequel.

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Ah, alright, the setting fits even better now. Good lord, you're quick. :rainbowlaugh:

"Look, if we're going to... do this... then I want you to be yourself. What's the point of being together if we can't be ourselves?"

Gallus makes a great point:scootangel:! Also, Gallus's eyes are green, not blue:raritywink:.

Nice job, I think this pairing is nice thanks for writing this story.

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Yeah, doing that the first time would give her some serious self esteem issues. The kinky transformed sex comes later after she's sure he loves her for her :twilightblush:

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That it does, and boy was it kinky:twilightsmile:.

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The MLP wiki had "moderate azure" listed on eye color for Gallus, which is a shade of blue, and any screen-cap I checked look blue to me.

A small part of him considered that maybe they could sell the venom as an all-natural sleeping aid.

I missed this on my first read through! That really solidified Gallus's character here. Nice job, and good work getting featured!

Yona and Sandbar I get but Gallus and Ocellus? That's a new one and after those two dragons gotten more friendlier during that egg-hatching adventure....

I demand a sequel!

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maybe Gallus and Ocellus will propose it to Thorax, make it a kingdom-wide investment and export. lol

Great story! Wouldn't mind reading a sequel detailing what Sandbar and Yona were doing.

I have been enjoying the heck out of all the student six pairing, and this is no exception. Cute and sexy story.

It's a cute story, but it felt a little rushed in places.

Meanwhile, in the teacher's dorms...

The door had been to Yona's room, but it was Sandbar who stepped out. He stopped, eyes wide as he caught sight of her.

Sounds to me that Sandbar getting that Yak pussy

(This story contains underage male on female sex between two different species, and while there I did not post "gore" tag, there is a small amount of blood.)

Hmmm I wonder why? 🤔

cute adorable now how about a sequal where she realizes she might be pregnete lol

Can you make one with Gallus and Silverstream?

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Yona and Sandbar I get but Gallus and Ocellus?

Hey, don't judge, we don't want no ship wars here?
I know you're not starting one, but it's still a ship.

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