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Oh, so it's like the Backrooms, but sexual

Comment posted by RainStripes deleted Apr 9th, 2022

I dig the idea. Liminal spaces but this. I wonder if there is exhibitionism if the backrooms monster gets involved. That, or it turns into horror immediately. Which I don't mind.

I’m getting a lot of positive vibes from reading this. Looking forward to more chapters from you. :twilightsmile:

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I will be releasing chapter 2 Monday. :twilightsmile:

Edit: Make that Sunday, I now have a bit more free time tomorrow.

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Can't argue with that. This is by far one of the strangest things I have written about. But I'm having a great time writing it.

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It’s all cool in friendship school, until the Liminal Spaces start making MLP characters fuck.

I loved the backrooms, and I've always had a fetish for sex in a pool, or hot tub, or (clean) locker rooms. Unf.

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Its the name of a level in the Backrooms. Which has a very extensive lore. I am mostly steering away from it and trying to do my own thing though.

When you find yourself in a scary place, but you're too horny to even think about it. All those horror movies have taught us well! :rainbowlaugh:

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Cool image... Not sure what it has to do with this though. Love the motions on it.

Wow, now that's some broken O2 efficiency. If Ocellus can diffuse enough from this water to keep herself, and 2 other people from drowning on a surface area no bigger than her neck, then there's probably enough dissolved O2 in the water to sustain Galus and Smolder if they started breathing it in themselves.

Edit: Also, I don't think this is a fault. I actually prefer some kind of safety net when sexualizing dangerous situations like this one.

Damn that was hot. I wonder how well Celly's shapeshifting works on accentuating her figure.

Is there going to be silverstream?

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Sorry no, just Ocellus, Gallus and Smolder.

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Aw, would have been perfect for silverstream

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Maybe I'll do a bonus chapter, playing around with this idea a bit. I have to agree, would have been fun.

Hmm, this is becoming a really weird mystery. Energy draining auras? Strange stalkers? Constant libido? I can only hope that these 3 will have enough energy left for what's looking more and more like a very long swim, but I trust Ocellus to keep them alive, no matter how long they need to stay submerged.

i hope by the end of this one of two outcomes happen:

1) they get out but all the unprotected sex they have leads to both females pregnant with Gallus' foals. If they need an explanation on how three unique creatures bred and impregnated then blame it on the space they were trapped in made it possible

Or

2) they never get out and become feral but not dangerously so. Just feral enough that they are no longer thinking intelligently and running on instinct. The most primal instinct, which is breeding and creating offspring. Then have it end that they've been there so long that the females have given birth to numerous children from Gallus and are currently pregnant again while raising their most recent group of children

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I’m personally hoping for the second one, but that’s probably my Breeding & Impregnation fetishes shining through.

Correct me if I'm wrong, isn't this a stock image of a commonly used japanese porno set?

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News to me, I just see everyone use it for when describing the Backrooms/Poolrooms.

Not exactly the ending I was expecting, but I am glad to see that this will be getting sequel spinoffs.

I'll love to see gen 5 discover the poolroom.

So Starlight is founding this world's version of Async?

I can think of so many backroom scenarios for creatures and setting. Even before reading this, I had a list for specific types.
Endless cave with lava: for dragons
Endless halls and rooms from the friendship/crystal castles
Endless hive holes: changelings
Labyrinths seaquestria: hippogriffs.

Each one I even wrote situations for. Example
The dragons(whoever is trapped) are lost due to a new challenge by the Bloodstone Scepter. They must overcome lust, greed pride etc. In each way.
The castles: are sentient and trap princess or ponies to find them at their worst and best.
The hive: Before her exile, Chrysalis created massive illusions to confuse and corrupt changedlings and ponies to either get them back under her control or drive them out.
Seaquestria had something similar to changedlings but with the storm king instead

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This is interesting. I am wrapped up in setting up CGL: Chronicles but would love to see this explored further. You should consider making this as an Anthology series of your own.

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The dragon one i will do. The others are freebies or with coauthors

Would love to see someone like Twilight Sparkle and Spike get involved.

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I think we can chalk it up to the physics defying nonsense of the place.

That said, the thrill Gallus was experiencing from being so close to drowning was well expressed. Fingers crossed for more!

I had a non-MLP, non-sex dream otherwise a bit like this scenario, where a bunch of locker rooms around the world were linked by a teleport maze. A bunch of people banded together and we eventually escaped.

aww, only half the student 6 got in on it…

It was a nice alternative ending. Inam curious if they will gain the same sort of understanding with the pool rooms that Juicy has. That could be interesting to see, if only briefly.

On the one hand, their friends probably think they are dead, on the other hand they all seem to be happy and content in their current lives.

I am kinds surprised that Smolder's children don't seem to have any physical traits from Gallus. Ocellus I kinda get, since it is probably rooted in changedling shapeshifting or something.

Trixie lifted her hat, leaned back and grinned. "Trixie will start working on her backstroke in the mean time."

You go girl

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While I can see some similarities to the pool known as "That Pool" with the slanted wall/ceiling, it is still a different pool, noticed by how the wall/ceiling of "That Pool" is fully comprised of windows.

Err, this was indeed fun, but I have a question: are your various Poolroom stories meant to be connected? I mean, if we know that Trixie Did It[tm] won't that take some of the mystery out of the stories i'ven't read yet?

(Sorry, @Trix, i was just kidding)

P.S. I have had the poolrooms ambient music that you recommended on repeat for four days now. I can hear something splashing in the distance. I don't think i'm alone.

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Just the two Creatures Gone Liminal and Creatures Gone Liminal: Lost in the Pool Rooms. The other ones are just side stories.

Fun! Forgive me if instead of a "alternative ending where they never escaped", i pretend that this is after the epilogue and they escaped and then came back. And never escaped the second time. Why? Just seems like fun!

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Oh, that's what I thought it was anyway, I get so engrossed in the stories that I rarely read chapter titles, let alone think about what they mean or retain that information for later.

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