After discovering somepony has crashed a hole in the her club house, Applebloom investigates only to find the last pony she would ever imagine.
This was a bad idea, and for that I am a bad person, still if it gets any response what so ever I promise to continue.
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Wow. Celestia outright points out that Applebloom is the best construction worker/carpender she's ever see, and 'Bloom STILL doesn't get it.
Dat pony is never gonna get her cutie mark.
New headcanon get: Celestia is a terrible flier, which is exactly why she rides in the chariot, and exactly why Chrysalis beat her. Chrysalis's attack was only about as powerful as a soft breeze, but a soft breeze is all it takes to knock the poor mare out of the sky.
She really needs to get out more. If you don't use it, you lose it. Even if you're a magical pony goddess.
That was a good story. Some minor grammatical errors, but otherwise good.
Now for a fan fiction about Rainbow Dash teaching Celestia how to fly, 1059948!
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For great lulz.
Fun little story. Desperate need of proofreading. I'm really not sure how "herlself" happened.
Nice! A really fun read, thanks for sharing it. I also agree that you need a little proof reading done on this story, yet even despite that I really enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to more stories from you.
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Hear hear!
I would watch that one on concept alone!
ughh yea, I know it needs some fixing up, just felt rushed to throw this down before work, will edit in the very near future.
Also thanks any and all for feedback this already got more attention then I feel it deserves.
this. is. GENIOUS
i can actually see this happening in the show then after a few episodes AB comes ba k with a cutie mark and help scoots and SB get theirs
I very much like the concept, and hope you continue, but it does need some cleaning.
This is a sweet and awesome story.
Dude..... YOU HAVE GOT TO CONTINUE THIS! IT'S TOO AWESOME TOO END HERE! MOAR I SAY! MOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!
.. Um, please.
1133234 Completely in agreement with this sentiment. D:
More, sir.