i'm sorry,but i couldnt get past the beginning of the second chapter..... RD being mad and abusive to Soarin within 30 seconds just because he couldnt hold out quite long enough to make her cum? thats what oral is for if the dick isnt enough if and its that important to her.....

That definitely comes up later in the chapter, it is in fact their usual solution. Since they have been together for a while, you learn that they've been pretty successful at doing it other times- this happens to be one of those times when Rainbow is frustrated with the issue. X3

Windy Whistles: Future Sex Therapist?

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I may have to admit that this is a tad confusing. What I meant to imply is that since Windy feels that Rainbow is the best no matter what, she basically demands a second opinion to make sure Rainbow is not, in fact, the Pegasus with the longest wingspan. >_< I'll try to avoid that kind of confusion in the future, lol

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Ooooh that sounds like a great picture. Maybe in a lab coat and black top, short skirt? CUTE <3

This was really good. A touching read.

They were having such a wonderful and touching family bonding experience, and now she would have to commit murder and matricide.

That made me laugh so hard

Haha and at the end, just... I don't think it's normal for daughter and mom be doing this, but atleast Soarin and Rainbow Dash had forgiven eachother. I was worried he would have been mad after seeing his marefriend basically cheat on him with her own mom...after all, I was on Soarin's side the whole time. I love Rainbow Dash (my no1 favourite pony) but in this fanfiction, you made her too much of an brat :(