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Forever Pine

Pine Breeze is a young, rambunctious filly living in a Indian-esque village. Her father, the chief, is very protective of her. After being invaded by slave-traders, Pine is taken away from everything she knows. Now on her own, she will have to rely on her natural instincts to make her long journey home.

Chapters (2)

Prologue-Amidst the Trees · 10th May 2019 · 1,185 words
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Chapter 1 · 12th May 2019 · 1,961 words
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IDontWatchMLP

IDontWatchMLP #1 · May 11th, 2019 · 2 · · Prologue-Amidst the Trees ·

Huh? This sounds interesting...

Matrixster

Matrixster #2 · May 11th, 2019 · · · Prologue-Amidst the Trees ·

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The second chapter is about done, would you want it out now?

IDontWatchMLP

IDontWatchMLP #3 · May 11th, 2019 · 1 · · Prologue-Amidst the Trees ·

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Take your time... make it your best.

Raretasticity

Raretasticity #4 · May 15th, 2019 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

Red Dead Redemption 2 meets My Little Pony. Im enjoying this story so far! It reminds me of the trail of tears with the Native Americans. The vocabulary the author uses and the steady structure moving the story along without focusing to much on little details make this a read you would find in Barns and Noble. The ending of chapter 1 left me in awe. Im beginning to love little Pine Breeze. Keep it up Matrixster!