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The first night after the ending of the Wonderbolt Academy, Sky Stinger and Vapor Trail discuss unfinished business over evening tea. Because while their long, arduous month may be over, Sky still cannot relax.
Not until he knows why she did it.
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Well that was a load of d'awwwwww.
Ain't nothing but a heart ache
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Glad you enjoyed it!
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This is pretty much the most d'aww pairing out there, so I'm happy if I did it justice! Thanks for reading!
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I want it thaaaaat way
Beautiful.
Does not end with the word "gullible". I'm disappointed.This was lovely. It's been a while since I've read a fic that good. I felt drawn right into this; I could smell the tea and see Vapor Trail's house like I'm there.I don't know what else to say. You are a much better author than I am, so I can't dare to give you much feedback. But I don't sense any rustiness in here. Just some small things; a misplaced comma here and there, a few sentences that could flow a little better, but nothing big.
This is pure writing gold. I could even hear Vapor Trail's voice while reading her dialogues, I'm surprised I remember her voice, it's been years since I've watched this episode.
I envy Sky Stinger. Reading this story leaves me longing, longing for the same kind of attention and love..... You invoked a lot of feelings in me with this story.
If this is you rusty, I can't imagine what you'll turn out once you get up to full steam.
The characters, the atmosphere, the sights, sounds and smells all blended together to make a memorable story which I'll savor again and again. I love how you made Sky a flawed person, but he still was able to confess his love for a pony he'd been horrible to. And you made Vapor not a doormat, but a precious creature who finally got him to confess what she knew all along. I honestly didn't know what he was so nervous about, but the buildup and the payoff were magnificent.
Looking forward to more of your work.
That was really sweet. Well done. I'm looking forward to the sequel as well
This was everything I wanted and more. Take your time with the sequel but if this is your rusty work then I can’t see a difference. A big fan of this pairing and these character this was perfect. Sweet, cute and so much in keeping with their personalities. I’m rambling but I loved it! Welcome back and look forward to whatever you come out with next.
This was an amazing story! It never would have occurred to me that it's been some years since you last wrote. Looking forward to anything you have planned next.
Question though: From what I read, the story is complete. But is there more for this particular story or does the tag simply need to be updated from "Incomplete" to "Completed"?
Will this be continued?