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10430821
its not dead lol, jus awaiting the next installment

She really a Q isn't she. Do you have more planned, I'm interested in what all the two leggers will think once they find out they are in his old Equestria.

10430879
I do, the next installment could come in a day, it could come in a year, we'll just have to see if I decide to be a random fuckwad

chapter 69

nice

10430884
lol

dick move... putting him back in his original equestria IMMEDIATELY after the umbrum incident? now that equis has to recover on it's own... not to mention the Akun... who are now without their emperor at the moment, unless those gateways work thru dimensions which i doubt.

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Considering she's the god of my little pony so...

😈😈😈😈😈😈now that's what i call going out with a bang may the gods of every culture give you a better life and may you fight to protect your friends an love one🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

I Love the fact that I was in on this Surprise nearly the entire time!!!!!

The Tree Of Harmony's image, a transparent Twilight Sparkle, grinned watching the blast wave ripple across Equis, it could feel the effects of the blast as umbrum where torn to shreds by it, finally the Tree had another spot from which it could influence events and people to suit its needs, along with the needs of Equis. For now however, it would be content to sit in its place as it always had done before, for thousands of years, and for thousands more it would sit, wait, observe and grow, spread its power throughout Equis as a whole, rather than just Equestria, all the world would be united not in name, but in Harmony Itself.

Really?
Now you will try to be a puppeteer ?
You little shi-

Her horn lit up with a bright white magic before everything went black. Faust smiled as she carefully put the Crystal Empire back into its spot in the Frozen North, having to make some more room to fit the additional land Lorenzo had gotten from the Changelings, such a silly little human, always striving to advance, to overcome what hasn't been done before, she smiled again, she had picked well, now it came down to watching what happened.

Ha! get dunked on Tree!

By the way I hope Lorenzo will check what that gem did to the heart and delete Trees influence and connection from it if something is left
There are many reasons why,one of them would be that he got the gem from Tree of "Harmony" that just suspiciously was the right tool to destroy umbrum.So she probably knew that this will happen and planned to use all the death on the planet
Crystal would also notice something

Or in different way, I hope Faust just deleted what the Tree did to the Crystal Heart

Even if the Tree's connection is severed because of a jump to different dimension they still should do something about it,just to be sure

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another point is, the tree in his original equestria... is it also as much a puppeteer? or can all the tree' connect thru that connection made with the heart?

10430927
the empire's two new planets went with it, how that works out I'll describe later after the next installment begins

10431179
lol, indeed

10431192
lmfao heheheheeh

10431192
the heart was influenced in the sense that it can now repel things several times stronger

10431259
I hope this Tree isn't like the one from anthro Equis
Actually characters version from anthro Equis were worse than the ones from the first world
Twilight , Luna,Cadence and let's hope Tree of "Harmony"

10431285
Yes, but the second job for the gem was this

finally the Tree had another spot from which it could influence events and people to suit its needs, along with the needs of Equis.

10431289
it meant spread harmony, protect the good and shun the evil, etc, I was more than half asleep when I wrote this gimme a break *floofily screms*

10431289
Hey I got question for ya, 1-10 how do you rate the series, just curious

Okay this was a good ending but there are a few problems I have with it.

The first is what will be happening to the Akun? Unless Lorenzo has a means to travel to and from his home universe to theirs a lot of problems will pop up with the Akun in the future. (Edit: I just realized that Faust might have moved their planet to Lorenzo's original universe but I imagine that is not something easily done.)

Second, you said a while back that Celestia will be going with Lorenzo when he returns
to his Universe and I doubt she will be willing to go with him till she is sure her ponies are safe. She may love Lorenzo but like the old saying, Heavy is the head that wears the crown and in this case I feel Celestia would place the safety of her ponies above her personal feelings no matter how strong they are.

Third, will the Abyssinians be alright now that Lorenzo is gone? I mean he was pretty much helping them in every way and now that he is gone they will be in for a bit of a hard time. I doubt it will be too problematic and they will eventually be alright but even still they took a enormous loss with the Umbra and will have a very hard time with the Empire gone.

I know that these problems will most likely be addressed in the next part of this story but I still wanted to mention them here and see if you are willing to at least comment on them here rather than have us wait.

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shes not going with him, the akuns two worlds are going to his universe, its not hard, she oversees an entire multiverse, its like putting a drop of ink into a paper, easy as fuck. The Abyssians went with em, no other way to avoid conflict if they didn't, they have the most advanced tech if he's gone, war would happen over it because now the empire's defenses wouldn't be protecting them

10431286
yea, cause anthro twi was basically the judge dredd of friendship. ugh...

Ha way to stick the landing

10431320
Are you awake to make this sound more friendly and eliminatee the doubt about her hidden agenda and plan?
Because it isn't for now.
For now this sounds similar to Palpatine

nice

10432190
alright, I just woke up lmfao.

The tree isn't evil, it wants to spread its influence over the world to protect everything on the planet from hostile dark magics, it can sense when something is going to happen, for the most part, how this works don't bother asking, I'm too lazy to explain, but the tree only wants to spread harmony and prevent dark magics from harming others, if the dark magic is used for good , say, healing or some shit, its fine, but if its used for combat, the one using it gets yeeted

Hmmm so we getting a sequel to this where we are back in the original Equestria. Sounds fun can’t wait to see it!

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thanks!

... Well that was little too ridiculous but the next targets need to be the tree of harmony and of course, Faust.

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simply not possible, faust controls the damned multiverse, it would be like a single cell trying to fight a tank, and the tree of harmony keeps the wild everfree's magic in check, plus, their not on the same world now, their back to lorenzo's

10487549
If your talking about a brazilian sci-fi where Earth is under constant surveilance because chocolate is a drug.

I think your talking about Free Chocolate (The Chocoverse) by Amber Royer

https://www.amazon.com/Free-Chocolate-Chocoverse-Amber-Royer/dp/0857667505

I could of course be wrong

The Monk
“Her hands were still bound with rope, she debated an escape before all the stupidity gave her an aneurysm.” -Scarheart

10819219
I just find it Over Used.

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Hi

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Hi.

10989476

Right, I mean Sapient like Pony or a Griffin.
I also just got through to your latest post, I greatly underestimated how big the population growth was.

10989482
I use sentient rather than sapient, as it would make no sense for other species of human like intelligence to know that word. As our scientific name is Homo Sapien, Other species knowing that that word means is likely to be zero, so I just use sentient to refer to any creature able to think, use logic, tools, and reason, aka anything thats a person despite the species

10989500
https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/sophont This word coined by science fiction captures the meaning well I believe.

Also (as I was passing through), I thought I'd mention: The last three entries in the feature box are a 'popular story has recently updated' section. If you're featured once, you'll usually appear there when your story updates automatically.

10989699
Allo, u interested in joinin the discord server?

10989944
Nah, just having a casual romp-through. Thanks though

10990381
it was discord who did the whole thing with the town to begin with, he's the god of chaos, he's gonna cause some chaos sometimes XD

Finally finished rereading the first 2 stories now on to the next lol

10991161
I don't remember, did you respond to my PM I sent ya? (sorry, I have a crap memory), also tell me what ya think, I know I was shit when I began this series, hence I'm working on a rewrite of the first story, but not this one (too many fuckin chapters too lol)

10991198
It's great!! This is one of the few stories in some time that has not only grabbed but held my interest. This story also finally has a protagonist that is close to my hight (6'6"), I also haven't noticed any personality traits that irritate too bad either (though he could stand to be a little bit more perverted lol). With all that said as well as the likelihood that I forgot something lol, I personally believe that the first story of this series was far too short seeing as it was only 10 chapters, but that's just my opinion, the story's great just feels too short to me, I'm the kind of reader that likes long chapters (5k or more words), as well as numerous chapters like anywhere from fifty into the hundreds of chapters. However you sir (or ma'am) are a great author with a great story so keep up the great work, whelp Imma stop wasting your time and git back to reading now piece oot lol

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P.s. I'mma pretty much a night owl in case you wounder why I don't reply much during the day

10992461
for me its night time, 1:41 AM, Check pms, add me on discord! I'd like to chat with you more, but fimfictions system doesn't give me instant notifications that I see

11122642
you have an odd habit of not responding when I try to speak with you

I'm guessing the BBQ kirin joint was inspired by the Salamander episode of inter species reviewers.

11162008
I don't know what that is, it was inspired by some random comment someone said to me on discord regarding the kirins odd biological/magical immunity to heat an how they'd use that to cook