I really enjoy reading this so far, and I can't wait to read more of it.

I thenk ether wwII or modern timeframe would be good.

rip and tear just like that fic back in 2017

It would be interesting if Lorenzo suddenly appear in the Commonwealth or the Mojave with his things and army

YOUR NOT DIED F-CK YES MORE YES FOR ROKSA

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Lol

Its main weapon was a massive rail gun build into the ship itself,

oh you mean the massive "FUCK OFF" cannon that we sci-fi nerds like to say XD

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I don't understand why you are so angry, these are not the sex crazed caribou

9706387
However, your comments amuse me

And Celestia purges the Nobel's after this.

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Let's hope so. Those two committed some serious breach of sovereignty. Crystal Empire is NOT part of Equestria.

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What do you mean?

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What?

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Thanks!

9700307
Thanks!

"I as King of this Empire, sentence you two to 50 years in maximum security prison." They both paled again.

Just wondering about these two dimwits. Have they served their time yet or we still have a ways to go?

The Crystal Lorenzo, and no I didn't name it, the crystal ponies did, as two thousand miles long, and 900 miles wide, it was made of a super strong steel tungsten alloy, every piece of this ship was enchanted to enhance how strong it was, now let's get into the details on weapons, troops, and all that jazz that the ship had. Its main weapon was a massive rail gun build into the ship itself, it would shoot a 36 inch rail gun round out the nose of the ship, it was a rapid fire weapon. There was also the many smaller, but still deadly weapons, I shall name them off now, it had 20 inch beam barrels all around the ship, on each side, 40 mm gamma cannons, 30 mm point defense plasma weaponry, tesla weaponry as long and wide as a school bus.

You realize that our moon's diameter is only 2156 miles, right? You made a ship the size of the fucking moon. That's the death star my guy.

Your spaceship is bigger than Pluto

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yeah I wrote that when half asleep an damn near ready to blackout lol, by the time I actually realized the mistake it was too late to change it as I had made several more chapters with the ship in it, and decided it was too late for me to go back and edit it all, and decided to just explain it as 'fuck logic this very specific time', it was a mistake on my part, but, I ain't got time nor the will to fix it by now lol