This story is a sequel to My Little Mages: Academia Ardens
Filthy Rich has opened an amusement park on the far side of Magiville from The Everfree Forest and has hired the mistress of attention Vignette Valencia to help get it on the map. Unbeknownst to all Vignette is not who she seems, and uses this to 1) claim the Elements of Harmony for her own and 2) break our Heroines by shattering one of the critical bonds among the 6, Applejack and Rarity
A My Little Mages Retelling of Rollercoaster of Friendship and Mean 6
Chapters (6)
This has become very interesting. I love more Chrysalis and this is a very interesting path you are going down on. Loving it so far
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Thank you
Not to sound rude or anything, but what's up with the sexy pictures for the equestria girls retellings? I know it's not important, but it is strange.
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Best images for my AU because Didj hasn't made My Little Mages art that was a better fit
Well, I'm guessing that Chryssy is playing the long game in this version of events.
Okay, let's see where this story goes.
Also, no offense, but the SoarinJack ship still kinda weirds me out a bit.
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Sorry. No spoilers
Whew. Significantly less cringey-ly shippy than the source material.
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, thank you
Oh darling,
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So any thoughts on the rest of the chapter?
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How long has Dash been Flash's wingperson? I also see you elected to adapt out the rollercoaster scene.
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More or less when they shared their nicknames. As for the Rollercoaster scene: while funny and works for the human Dash, it was a little OOC for the Rainbow of the main series
Me reading the shippy FlashLight parts: AWWWWW!
Me reading the parts with the evil clones and Chrysalis: This makes way more sense than what we got in the source material.
Me at the end: Please tell me that you're not going to do a repeat of the random white room scene. I kinda want the girls' rescue/escape to actually take effort. Wait, is that part with the escape room going to be important?
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No spoilers
Hi there. I was waiting until the story was finished before I commented, but thanks very much for doing this. I loved how good a job you did combining the two stories in a way that made BOTH stories make more sense. Thank you immensely for liking the idea enough to do it and great job on the exchanges, characterizations, action, general wrap-up and future story set-up.
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feel free to share your thoughts on each of the chapters, in full.
Well, it was still better thought out than the random white room.
Okay, I wanted to write about this in a blog post, but I've been pretty short on time. Here it goes; I think I should probably warn you that Rainbow Dash annoyed me SO MUCH during that special. And I thought we turned up Dash's ego and stupidity for your version of Rainbow Rocks.
Oh good gravy, assuming that Dash is going to get a similar treatment for your version of Spring Breakdown, I'm already feeling a headache coming on. 
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I actually haven't sat down and watched the special in its entirety, yet
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... and... that's all that stood out to you?
Nothing else caught your eye?
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There's the reference to "Friendship Through the Ages," sweet boy going into "understanding boyfriend" mode, sweet boy about to do something cool only to get hit with the poorly timed door bust gag, and sweet boy playing a role in Chryssy's defeat. Oooooh, I almost forgot the callback to the psychic link the girls share. I haven't seen that in a while. 
So, which one of those are you referring to? 
Let's see.
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Um... the second... (sorry thrid) time in my works Flash transfered his boon to one of the Mane 6, last time it was Rainbow and her bow... (no that was the first time, the last time was when he threw his buckler to RD), this time it was giving AJ his sword... no euphemism intended.
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Well, I already knew that Flash was supportive, so I fail to see why I need to make a big deal of it whenever it shows up.
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It's not he's supportive that I wanted to call your attention to, it was what his support entailed in this that I wanted to call attention to and how it related to who he supported and perhaps call attention to certain similarities and differences to the other time(s) he supported others in a similar way.
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I don't play or know squat about DnD. I have no idea what any of that is supposed to mean. All I'm understanding is that Flash gave an Ashleigh Ball character a supercharged weapon to fight off a bad guy.
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It's okay Sugarcube. I wasn't trying to connect to D&D, what I was trying to call attention to is more around the lines of the similarities and differences of AJ and RD, of Loyalty and Honesty, and in part Flash's own relationship with RD and AJ and by extesion the rest of Twilight's friends. I was trying to have you think more on a thematic level.
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that was really bad.
OUCH! I thought Applejack was going to take the blow, not Rarity.
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So the parade is more important than her friendship with her friends?
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I see what you did there
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