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HeartfireFirebrand


A leaner of SFM who writes ocassionally

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I may not fully understand what this is a reference to, I LOVE this story so far

It's pretty good please continue mainly cause it's a good premise

Please for the love of god let Spike be the reincarnation of Sans. It would be so perfect.

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to be fair it whole be cool

that's awful early for the empire to return hmm

9593412
fair enough, i was gonna sit and theorize all day xD always fun to do in some of the more 'world-building' stories.

Well didn’t expect that

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Don't know if anyone answered you but the story is a cross over of Undertale

9597159
Thank you, that is what I was thinking, but wasn't sure

I'm honestly surprised that Twilight wasn't born a pony and this took place after the Genocide Route. Chrysalis got what she wanted though. I'm also glad to FINALLY read something after a week of finding incest fics in the feature and popular box.

“You have a lot of explaining to do, you knew the threat of an attacker and the fact that an Alicorn who is your niece start behaving oddly and you don’t even notice a thing. Equestria almost was overrun because of this!”

Twisk DOES have a good point, though. You know what? I'm going to call this one Twisk.

This is a strange post-Genocide crossover, but I'll keep going because I like the concept anyway.

No problem. If there are other people with another soul, it helps to make a portmanteau so names won't be as confusing. I'm honestly hoping Pinkie won't be renamed Legion since she has three other ponies sharing her body (and yes, I'm counting Pinkamena on this one, if she exists.)

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She is a single individual with three lifetimes, simply her original self has returned which is why Betty was replaced with Amber.

9601595 Oh, good. Makes more sense than having the ONE body share- oh, wait.

Uh, I can't think of a good name for the Clover/Copper fusion. The result is stupid or unfortunate.

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I will proably refer to him as Copper when he returns, Clover isn't known as much more than a legend by most ponies.

I have one thing to say to this....

It's progressing and changing WAY to fast.
Like What the frick is up with the sudden changes that make no sense.
My brain is struggling to comprehend this

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Also It's based off of an AU of Undertale, Called Glitchtale by Camila Cuevas.

Pretty good short and to the point cold be better though

Don't know how but I can see the potential

Good run could honestly. See more potential

9610541
I have another undertale inspired story coming up but this one is mine, not an idea I adopted from another.

They blasted him with the TRIFORCE!?!?

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No, the Delatrune is the symbol you see all throughtout Undetale. It was the symbol on Toriel's dress and even in the intro, it is two triangles at the top pointing upwards while the one at the bottom pointed downwards unlike the Triforce wher there are two at the bottm and one on the top which are all pointing upwards.

You know I am stupid right,

I think you messed up here.

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There are other errors in this and other stories but the 2 I have read are still fun to read.

Ps this chapter doesn't fit as well.....

Pinkie being Betty is Obvious.

Pinkie/Agate shook her head “I was too optimistic about this, I just want to return to Ponyville.” The group returned to Ponyville aware that a new threat was out there growing in strength.

Isn't Pinkie "Amber"?

She then saw the horn fragment and crushed it, Twilight/Frisk stood up as her LV jumped from 90 to 490. The pair rejoined the group, Pinkie/Betty smiled “I suppose you should know my name before I cam here, I am Bête Noire also known as Betty.”

Should’ve gone with 420

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wife:honey is that a weed?
Husband: it's a crayon
wife:i'm calling the police
BEEP BOOP BOOP

Huh, this was an interesting take.

10474412
I probably could have done better with this story as a whole. I may do something similar kind of later.

10474416
I agree that this story could've been done better as the pacing was too fast IMO.

fck m8 your stories mix my brain with dirt

fck my brain i forgot how to breath for a while

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