(This starts like crud, but slowly grows up better)
Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie, set off to Fluttershy's house to bring her some cupcake's since no-pony has heard or seen her in a while, hoping that she isn't sick, they leave. When they get no reply, and notice an odd smell at her door, they find something inside they didn't expect. To find one of their friend's seems no longer like her element, and considers every-pony that were her friends, like animals?
(first story to Backwards Series) Please read, but ignore the crappiness of the first three chapters, i know they are bad, but it gets better, this was my first story btw
i know this isn't as long as some ppl might have expected when i promised longer chapters..but i had to end it there, becauz the next chapter explains something, and i really wanted to get to that part, i thought this would be a good place to stop and continue o later
I loled at Dash : Should I send a letter to the Princess...nah, I'm just gonna go to bed.
Oops, my bad ! Didn't saw that she was tied up !
lol fine
though, i am actually sorta entertained, wouldn't mind if u continued a little, just saying
holy shit, this story made me cry. please continue it, it's only disliked because of the short chapters I bet.
thanks, prob. right,will continue!
actually, i just noticed i didn't finish that..actually she was choke, but i dont no y i didnt put that...
wht was it thiking!
i dont care if its a short chapter i care about the good story!mustage me!
its still good!
thank you! so glad to hear ppl saying that, i have been rly busy so there wont be some chapter for a few days, maybe one 2morrow if i have the chance
1071276 choked to death my sir!
After a while they had *mad* it to her cottage, but the Pegasus stopped walking at the fallen tree that blocked the doorway.
After a while they had *mad* it to her cottage,
After a while they had *mad*
MAD!
"MADE..." OR "ARRIVED!"
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okay geez im workin on it! lol
Finally, new chapter!
good chapter
thanks
please continue
will do that
ta da, new chapter again
hope u like
oh god ur making me cry
this story is great! keep up the work i actually enjoy this most dark fic stories suck
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thanks! i really appreciate the support, i am working on a new chapter right now
I have completed this fan fiction, but there will be a second one
Backwards: Insanity is Not Sane
To see what will happen next!
Will Dashie become un-traumatized?
Will Flutershy become normal?
Will Twilight be able to save them?
Find out next!
Oh, btw, if you want, do tell your friends who you think may be interested, a book needs readers! though i have greatly appreciated those who have read it, and do hope they wil read my next story. I have appreciated your help guys, in criticism, moral support, and well, just being dam awesome
whoa....just whoa.....
Bitchershy or butchershy?
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Chocked to death
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i SAID i never saw that vidoe until after i wrote the first story, i didnt know okay? sorry geeze, i rly didn't mean that, i thought i made the whole thing up til now, so dont bug me about that, rly sorry that was an accident
shes better with a chainsaw and not a butchers knife. just dont know what to call her though? would chainshy sound good enough?what about fluttersaw?
whats next after this?
1218583 how shud i know? i never planned on naming her...but i think fluttersaw sounds better^.^
Backwards: Insanity is not sane, oh, nvm u already found it lol
1218583 give her ninja stars and a giant samurai blade*maniacle lagh*
The details make me
just realized. what happens when we combine the cratos and fluttershy?
ohh this shit's good.
1243648 ninja fluttershy, lol, well that was kinda the idea, its either a butcher knife, or a samurai blade. good, glad i give enough detail to actually have that effect
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you noticed where i was going witht his? good, thanks for the compliment, sorry i havent worked on it in a while, a tornado ran through outr town, cut off power for a few days, and my comp was dead, so yeah...
Holy shit this is awesome
i've read this and forgotten most of it except for bits and pieces witch i'm glad i did
This is positively terrifying
Everyone died.
THE END
The only animal I feel bad for is angel.
No.
No there doesn't.
Rarely is there ever one in these types of stories.
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And the answer to all of these questions is NO!