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protractror


I write stories, I hope I'm getting better as I go. Watch out for unfortunate go time and Home Alone, not my best works.

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Rainbow Dash starts to get suspicious of Pinkie Pie's claim that she isn't afraid of ghosts. Especially when she blatantly declares she is scared of ghosts. This situation is going to have to be solved Rainbow Dash style. No one really knows what that means, but it definitely means a lot of bruises.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 12 )

OH MY GOD....it has a weakness:pinkiegasp:

I can totally see this as an episode. I mean, it could explain so much. Greatly done. 4,5/5 because there are gramatical errors. Oh, and welcome to my track list.

Awesome stuff, really good!

Ha twilight gona get tackled by pinkie:twilightoops:

I've read both chapters. You've been doing great on this, and I can totally see this happening. Keep up the great work! I hope Pinkie Pie gets over her fear!:pinkiehappy::heart:

P.S. I listened to "Giggle at the Ghostes" in order to make it ironic. LOL.

At first twi was like :twilightangry2::let's do this
Then pinkie was like :pinkiegasp::GHOST (runs off)
The twi was like :facehoof::horse apples
Then rainbow dash was like :rainbowlaugh:, much :rainbowlaugh:

And some where, far away, celestia was like :trollestia::son, I am disappoint

That's Pinkie Pie for you. Great ending!

Not bad. Quite funny and original and amusing to read through. The final sentence made for a very nice ending. I did feel it was a bit strangely paced at times, though, both the story as a whole and some of the dialogues.

This was very funny to read, I had a good amount of laughs, specially in this last chapter :rainbowlaugh:

Good job :pinkiehappy:

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