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What the hell did I just read? I can't believe the kind of nasty shit that this fandom comes up with. I mean, seriously, where in the christing fuck do people get the idea that her name is "Rarity Belle"?

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You have evidence of a better one? I'm not averse to editing if I've got a reason to.

>those trigger warnings

...wat.

9572775

Rarity Belle

I feel you bro. This shit triggers me worse than cockvore and diaper fetishes combined

9572775 I like the name Rarity Belle.
The rest of this story was kinda boring, my dick is still soft, but I did like testing the limits of the contest rules. The moon speak was a nice touch. Thumbs ups.

This might do better with two versions, one without the insanity and one with. Consider it. If you skip the nonsense it's rather sweet.

Also, yes, the most disgusting and heinous thing about this was the unneeded last name. Rarity, Fluttershy, Coloratura, Celestia, Luna. Not everypony has a last name and they don't need one.

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It's was a common fan theory back in the first few seasons before they started introducing parents. The Apples are called the Apples so family names were thought to exist in some form. Some people even thought AJ's real name could have been Jacqueline Apple, with Applejack being a nickname or something cause some ponies had two part names like Pinkamena Pie of the Pie family, Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash. Applejack of the Apple family, Rarity, and Fluttershy were the odd ones left out with single names back then and among those AJ was known to be part of the Apple family so back then some people just latched onto Belle from Sweetie Belle as Rarity's family name and Shy as Fluttershy's last name in some fan works.

We have since learned that Fluttershy's family name really is actually Shy.

9573045

But Steel, those ponies have last names.

Rarity Th'Unicorn.
Flutter Shy
Ra Ra
Celesti A
Lun A

9573083
Yes, but it's not a convention that's followed strictly. We've since learned that a pony can be born Chiffon Swirl and rename themselves Cup Cake. My guess is that Rarity was once Cookie Cutter and became Rarity :raritywink:

But maybe she was born Rarity. If she did have a parent's last name, it made her Rarity Crumbles or Rarity Flanks. :raritycry:

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We have since learned that Fluttershy's family name really is actually Shy.

We have learned no such thing. Her parents are not referred to by any names in the episode, and though Mr. and Mrs. Shy were used in the credits, that's pretty much the same as Angry Unicorn #3--not a real name. Jim Miller tweeted repeatedly after the episode that they had not named Fluttershy's parents. And if they're the Shy family, why isn't it Zephyr Shy?

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Actually, Dash did refer to them as Mr and Mrs Shy as well.

Since this oddly seems to have upset the most people, I'll probably go change it - easily enough done and all.

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I'd consider it, except that the insanity is the story's raison d'etre, depending on which insanity you mean.

9572901
I am a firm believer in letting folks know what lay in the abyss before they gaze into it.

Like I said - 3 A.M. inspiration.

9573324
The writers have said they might change the names later but seeing as we're approaching the end that's probably not gonna happen. You don't refer to a married couple as Mr. and Mrs. [child's name] It's usually supposed to be said that way if they shared a last name after marriage (in the real world at least). Also they are referred to as the Shy family in The Elements of Harmony Vol. II guidebook

The Elements of Harmony Vol. II guidebook

The Shy Family lives in Cloudsdale. It's where Mrs. Shy spends her time gardening and Mr. Shy collects clouds since retiring from the weather factory. The heroism of their daughter, Fluttershy, makes them burst with pride! Their son, Zephyr Breeze, dropped out of mane therapy school. He never leaves the house. Mr. and Mrs. Shy wish he'd get a job and his own place.

As for Zephyr not having Shy in his name you could ask the same thing about any of the Apples that don't specifically have Apple ending their name. Big Mac, Red Gala, Red Delicious, Golden Delicious, etc. There's also apparently a point where Granny says her parents and siblings were called the Smith Family before they founded Ponyville.

I'm not trying to say the writers had a set of rules and followed a plan for naming everyone because it's fairly clear they didn't do anymore than spit ball it, multiple families have different naming conventions. The Pie's and Cakes all have last names, Apples are all named after types of apples, Twilight and her mother have the same first name, Rarity and Rainbow's families are named for their cutie marks, and Fluttershy's parents aren't even given first names. I'm just pointing out how Rarity Belle became one of the first fannon full names for Rarity. Well all that and also because of the punny nature of the Belle of the Ball that Rarity always sees herself as.

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Well so does Belle, that's why I always thought it fit. There's a line in "Becoming Popular" where she sings about being "the belle of the ball"

Becoming as popular as popular can be
Making my mark, making my mark in high society
I'm the belle of the ball, the star of the show, yeah
I'm the type of pony every pony, every pony should know

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9573045
And, through the power of the delete key, she is no longer Rarity Belle. :-P

9573573
Ah good. Honestly, the rest may just be skipped past by anyone offended by weird content.

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If that's the case, you missed two.

But I think you should put em all back, cuz fuck the haters. This is majestic.

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I honestly don't care either way, and at this point, am mostly laughing my ass off at the fact that of ALL the things people could take umbrage with in this story (which would've been worse in the first draft, of course), THAT is what people picked. :rainbowlaugh:

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It's not really what I would have expected, but then again, perhaps I've only seen your more mild work.

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Heh - well, part of that is because I'm not even into a significant amount of this material. Another part is because I *very rarely* let these muses out of their cages, but these two were insistent and it seemed like it would be a Hell of a "something different" for the contest.

I'm writing my own story and I was wondering how do you do the thing with the letter Luna sent?

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The [ quote ] tags, just take the spaces out of that to copy it.

Or hit the " in your toolbar here to generate the tags in your comments, like I did with this!

Sweeties’ cervix stretched out to admit the intruding phallus, before she felt an instant of relief while Luna drove back to her ovaries.

Apostrophe's in the wrong place, and this is not how the female reproductive tract is laid out. That said, this was an enjoyable read even if I'm into exactly zero of the things in it.

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No, it's not, but it's also not designed to admit teenagers with horns, so I think mistakes in layout are among the least of the dreamscape's anatomical sins here. ;p

Fixing the typo though.

9575041
Yeah--if anything, the anatomical errors would be Sweetie Belle's.

I have witnessed something. :rainbowderp:

Sunny.exe has crashed and stopped working.

I haven't read a story this hawt in a long time.

Extremely Anatomically Dubious Activities? I'm in.

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A move which shall henceforth be known as "mistake number one...."

10022457 Mistake? I believe it is you, sir, who is mistaken. This was a decision, and an excellent one at that.

9572775 It could be worse. We could have gotten a writer or creator who realised everything they say about the show is canon, went mad with power, and gave Rarity a completely ridiculous last name. It's happened before.

Comment posted by Matthewthawes deleted Aug 31st, 2023
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