This story is a sequel to Prehistoric Thunder: a Power Rangers story
A few years after Dai Shi was defeated, Casey has been teaching at the same Pai Zhua academy ever since. There has never been any sign of the Rinshi...or any danger for that matter. But for some reason, one by one, those who fought against Dai Shi’s evil forces have been taken to a new land full of magic and ponies. The weirdest thing is that the ponies already know what ‘Power Rangers’ are.
This story is sort of a sequel to Prehistoric Thunder. I suggest you go read that so you know what some of the characters are talking about.
Chapters (14)
Not the first one I've seen here. Tracking to see where this goes.
Okay after reading this, I must say: When a new character is speaking, you need to start a new paragraph. It's a little confusing to read when it's all bunched up like that.
My only complaint, good stuff so far.
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I would do that, but I don’t want to add a new paragraph every time someone speakers. If I did that, there would be like 50 paragraphs
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There’s a lot of dialogue on this story
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If you like this story, you should check out my other story: “Prehistoric Thunder.” It might help you understand what a few of the characters are talking about in future chapters
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Trust me, you'll be better off splitting up each bit of dialogue.
Same issue. It's all bunched up.
Is that Rito Revolto at the end?
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You’ll have to wait and see
Seems Rito didn't get the memo his sister is the Mystic Mother now and an ally of the Mystic Force Rangers. She'd probably give him a earful over this.
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Well, what can I say? Rito is an idiot.
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This is true. So how long til the bomb that gives him amnesia again blows up on him? Cause that'll be fun if it happens again permanently as no Lord Zedd to meddle now since Zordon's heroic sacrifice.
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It took me an embarrassing amount of time to figure out that was a joke
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Indeed, one of the most iconic ones in the series I think cause it happened at the end of MMPR or MMAR I think and the start of Zeo when they blew up the Command Center and opened way to the backup one. Rito and Goldar spent a good amount of time amnesiac. Wonder if this Rito is from a time before Rita was purified and flung forward in time Samurai Jack style? Cause Rita's good by this point and one of the reasons Octolus the Supreme Master of the Underworld and a Cthulhu like monster was able to be destroyed.
I’ll PM you so no one else sees the spoiler
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Is there anything you can think of to improve the story? I have the next two chapters finished, but I’m gonna wait to post them. I could really use some feedback if you have any.
Aww, that's cute the way Casey and Starlight still got to talk to each other even after Casey had to leave.
Yeah. I’ll submit my next story on Friday. I’ll also still be using that element you mentioned for something special