A weight has been lifted from my shoulders
Four years after graduating from high school, Connor, Ethan, and Kira have lead normal lives. That is, until a vortex opens up to another dimension full of... ponies? Why are they there? Where are they?
They try to get back to Earth only to realize that the land they currently are in is under attack by an old foe and it is up to them to recover their old powers and save it!
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Hard to say. Given Zeltrax is back you could go the route of monster attacks one after the other as the rangers try to figure things out.
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I know, but I’m talking about the relationship between the ponies and humans or something like that
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Not sure there. Clearly friendship and getting to know everyone is something that fits both series. So that could be used.
9470610
Alright. Any other advice? All is appreciated
9470655
Nothing I can think of at the moment.
If I had to guess, summoning something. Usually what happens when things like them are involved.
9485973
Sort of, a bit different than usual though. I’ve never seen this used before and thought it would be a nice idea. Anyhow, how are you enjoying the story so far?
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It's pretty good so far. Can't wait to see what you have planned.
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Thank you
Now if only someone else would comment
When Tommy going to join? Or is it those 3?
9509893
Like I said in the first chapter, no Tommy Oliver. Maybe, but I seriously doubt it. I will bring back A familiar face in the next chapter though
9509893
ooo...someone knows their dino rangers!
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Yes, yes I do. That’s my favorite season in fact
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My bad, fourth chapter
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interesting how many times tommy gets dragged into ranger business isn't it? xD
9509923
IKR. But really, he’s probably not gonna show up in this story
9509924
My favorite Time Force but Dino my 2nd fav
Seriously? No one’s gonna try and guess who’s comin’ back?
What about the White Dino Ranger? ...I forgot his name, OK?
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Trent appears a bit later
9526800
Maybe if you actually read the story, you’ll find out
I see the ponies got in on the fun in the final battle and got to kick some butt. I liked it!
9598859
Great hear! I just finished “Welcome to the Jungle” so you can go check that one out. Again, it’s way better than this one.
I'm just getting into this story because one of the recommended stories that came up recently to me was Call of the Wild, one of the things that I don't know if it was fixed by later chapters or stories... is that when you have characters speak, I don't believe they're supposed to be in the same sentence, let alone the same paragraph. It makes it a bit too easy to lose track of who is talking.
Aside from that, I'm liking the story so far, Dino Thunder was my favorite season of power rangers
I know this now...I didn’t know this when I wrote this. I’m sorry to say that this issue is repetitive throughout this story, but it’s not present in the rest of them. Glad you’re liking it, Dino Thunder was my favorite as well
I'm surprised that the black ranger didn't make an appearance... especially since the beginning of the story specifically mentioned him doing work in Canterlot
Edit: Yeah, right here in the first chapter
Makes me wonder why he didn't show up...
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That didn’t have an actual impact on the story, it was just a reference to another story
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I noticed that it didn't. While I did enjoy the story on the whole, I do have to admit the way the character dialogue was set up did feel rather clunky at times, since it would lose me with who was talking... forcing me to re-read the paragraph over carefully to make sure I knew who was speaking.
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Okay, you know what? That settles it, I’m going through this entire story and fixing all of that
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That does certainly seem like quite the task. I do wish you good luck in it, and I believe it would help any future readers who are interested in reading about pony and power rangers crossovers. I still have tabs open with Welcome to the Jungle and Call of the Wild because I'm curious about what comes after Prehistoric Thunder. Granted, my personal favorite series is SPD but I can't expect everything to pander to what I like.
I am excited to read the sequel to this story.
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Don’t worry. The problem with the dialogue was only in this story. Welcome to the Jungle and Call of the Wild are fine
https://youtu.be/z3n8GNtUwpY
Broodwing? Oooh it’s getting good