Broken Sunset

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Dusk Star Shine

Dusk Star Shine #1 · Mar 30th, 2019 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Oh this is going to be a good story, please say that she will heal up though so she can walk around, also I can't wait to see what kinds of changes you have in this version, also is this version just as sexual as the other one?

dvdspires

dvdspires #2 · Mar 30th, 2019 · · · Chapter 1 ·

This looks to be interesting and I’m looking forward to seeing how this version goes, not that I have a problem with the other one.

One point however, consider getting the free version of grammerly, it should do wonders for the basic spelling mistakes that crop up.

dvdspires

dvdspires #3 · Apr 7th, 2019 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Because of this sex in this world is seen as something to be ashamed

Nothing.

at best I can live up to either my 80's or 90's at best,

Remove one of the best’s.

It’s easy to forget how nasty old school Sunset could be.

DarkHooves

DarkHooves #4 · Apr 12th, 2019 · · · Chapter 2 ·

I really like the story but it's really hard to read because of the sentence structure and so much repetition.

LEGION55

LEGION55 #5 · Apr 16th, 2019 · · · Chapter 2 ·

It would be interesting if Sunset were to become a Futa

Royal7

Royal7 #6 · Jul 1st, 2019 · 1 · · Chapter 3 ·

Got it this is like a more evil version of her... that might take over the world. That is interesting and I hope her no incest rule gets thrown out even if just to find a way to get back at Celestia.

PixelatedPerson