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Totally Kyle
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Totally Kyle
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Is it meant to be on hiatus?
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If I'm being perfectly honest, I should probably change it to "Cancelled." This is basically an unfinished story that I currently have no intentions of finishing. I was originally planning on posting the whole entire thing all at once, but I haven't even started the next chapter yet and I don't know if I ever will.
Honestly, I'm just posting what I have. It's an unfinished story that I MIGHT finish one day, but I don't think that it's very likely. I'm sorry.
EDIT: Okay, I'm finishing it, I'm finishing it! Please stop with the dislikes!
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Fair enough,
I honestly do hope this does get finished one day, this is fun.
That last line was far too damn funny.
Everytime a bombshell drops, I can see the anime background cut in.
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Lol so can I, now that you mention it
Okay, question: WHY is everything always made of freaking MARBLE in rich people's mansions? Marble is REALLY not the best material to make ANYTHING out of; it's actually one of the worst! It has a Mohs hardness of THREE, for Luna's sake! My FINGERNAILS have a 2.5! A better material would be GRANITE, as it's a SEVEN, but NoOoOoO. Marble's PRETTIER, so it MUST be better!
(Just to clarify, this is not in ANY way a rant against you. This is a rant against rich idiots who build their houses out of a rock barely stronger than their fingernails. This is actually a really interesting and well-written story about which I have no complaints.)
(Why, yes, I AM a Geology student, how'd you know?)
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AGREED
It totally fits for Rarity to have the pillar men theme playing when she first talks to those two guys talking about the goddess. Just the first part of course.
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Thank you for the daily reminder that I still need to watch that anime lol
I never realized how sexy aj could be until I read this
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Nothing is hotter than having a sexy woman with superhuman strength completely ravage you. I'm glad that you have seen the light :D
Love your writing style! I absolutely adored this story, instant favorite!
I hope those guys are okay. Like, they all played their parts and kinda got beaten up so I really hope they're doing fine.
A small nitpick of mine as someone who enjoys conversational period pauses in stories per how they can show a silent back and forth as a character processes some news, I figure there's a line too many in the closer here;
The way its formatted now implies that Rarity yells after two pauses from AJ, rather than AJ yelling after her second pause. ...I get that this is completely nerdy to soapbox about, though moments akin to this in other stories have stuck very strongly with me before.