"My Hero..."
written by Totally Kyle
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Everytime a bombshell drops, I can see the anime background cut in.
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Lol so can I, now that you mention it
It totally fits for Rarity to have the pillar men theme playing when she first talks to those two guys talking about the goddess. Just the first part of course.
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Thank you for the daily reminder that I still need to watch that anime lol
A small nitpick of mine as someone who enjoys conversational period pauses in stories per how they can show a silent back and forth as a character processes some news, I figure there's a line too many in the closer here;
The way its formatted now implies that Rarity yells after two pauses from AJ, rather than AJ yelling after her second pause. ...I get that this is completely nerdy to soapbox about, though moments akin to this in other stories have stuck very strongly with me before.