U have very little time don’t u

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yeah.... being a father mixed with over worked, under payed, and still trying to get sleep. it isnt easy.

Once Luna calmed down, she responded. "Celestia, you can't deny the way she appeared. Harmony it's self delivered her to us. Not your student, not some random family in this entire world, but us."

You used the wrong its. It's is a contraction while Its is possessive. Just wanted to let you know.

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thanks. I was writing this chapter during my work breaks on my phone, so it's easy to miss those.

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I'm willing to help you proof read whenever I'm not working on my own stories or school if you want.

If u ever get stuck then ask the comment section for ideas

YESYESYES Finally more!

nice but when will the next chapter come out?