Dat cover picture...

First!

Oh, and Great way to begin the story!

I love it

Thanks!

Damn it I wanted first again!

More?

Ya know, Tori, for once I have to agree with you!

Wow, this story must be great for you to not say anything negative! You've even been rude about featured stories!

Well this story is really tugging on my heartstrings, 'cause ya know, my crush on scoots and all that...

Yeah, I understand. After all, you are me...

W-w-why-y-y-y?!

Ahahaha. Glad you like it!

Is there death, I HATE pony death.

This oughta be good!

It sucks that you could only press like on a story once. Since I can't spam the like button, here's an internet cookie.

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Omg i loved it

Awww, nom nom, thanks!

Chapter 3 to be released tonight

It's a pretty sad story...

I loved it.

Ah, but it's not even over yet!

Wahhhhhhh

Im still in denial...

The best part, so far, is Scoot not going to pieces: she's not happy with the situation, obviously, but she's behaving like the grownup mare we always hoped she'd become.

Aww, thanks guys!

You made me cry, you brilliant bastard.

Aww, thanks.... chapter 3 in like 5 minutes.

w..what?

shes dead!?!?!?

WHY!

well... atleast shes at peace.

hey, we need a 21-gun salute over here!

Chapter 3 up!

Whyyyyyyyy?

Great story so far, looking forward to reading more!

I was interested in the title and synopsis, so I decided to read your fic.

I gotta say, the emotion is very strong and that is what makes your story really good.  Have a moustache   

Now if you excuse me, I must go shed a tear.

>>Mercury Hooves

Thanks, and there remains only one final chapter.

>>Silverness Awww, thanks! And Don't worry, it'll be okay!

Good job! I was really crying! i almost never cry even though i am a pretty emotinal girl! This and Upon wings of sacrifice and it's not the same without you are the only ones that made me cry! I am hoping we could see a chapter about the other 5's reactions to her death, that would be very nice.

>>Fusion Bolt Hi! Thanks for the feedback! Unfortunately, I won't dive any deeper into the reactions of the Mane 6 to Dash's death. I have something much more chilling and bittersweet planned, just you wait, though.

Beautiful sir. Manly tears were shed in the reading of this chapter. RD and Scooterloo are the best of friends. They are the best pairing, no matter how you put it.

>>11265531126553 FUCK YOU MAN RIGHT IN THE FEELS...i'm crying so many manly tears i can't see the keyboard.....

>>11265531126553 Jesus you killed it.  I didn't just shed one or two tears, I fucking cried buckets reading this.  A star and a thumb for you good sir.  I sense a feature coming for this one.  Although that quote of yours makes me fear for my heart strings in the next chapter.  MORE chilling?  

EDIT:  Upon further inspection, the story IS in fact, already featured.  I hadn't realized.  Congratulations!

*sniff*

I actually... started ... crying at this. If you call me getting an emotional breath of air go up through my body and my eyes watering crying.

My Little Dashie didn't even make me shed a tear, it just made me feel... shaken, like after watching an epic movie. This.. though. When I saw that headstone..... you... you monster! You made me almost, almost shed a tear! I haven't done that since I watched WALL-E. WALL-E is still ahead of your story, since my eyes still watered after the next two times I watched that. I also felt changed after WALL-E, but not in this story.

But you... you just made my eyes water. You made my eyes water. I will... *sob* tell my grandchildren about you. You... are almost as good... as Twilight Sparkle herself.

I seem to have a sad weakness of death and love stories....

BUT I BETTER

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I'm amazed by your ability to capture emotions perfectly. I love this story and keep up the good work

(P.S. I'm not one that cries but If I was, I'd be crying buckets)

Amazing job! A very sad story but an enjoyable one   I'm looking forward to more of your stories! and of course the rest of this one!

The effects I had when reading this story:

Dehidration

LightHeaded

Red face

Sobbing

Shaking

Saying "No no, i-It's more of f-farewell, than a g-godobye. *Sob*"

Please don't got Rainbow Dash, I love you and I'll never ever let you go.

Thank you for making this story, I am constantly wiping the tears out of my eyes to not make a spelling error on this comment.

I want it to be perfect for the perfect story

~ JacobStar9104

I cant even....this story, My Little Dashie didn't even make me cry this much.....When I read this, I feel like a part of me died with Rainbow Dash, You really conveyed the emotions of this story....its just........its almost to much. This story is a great, if not one of the best stories out right now......

I honestly don't see how you could make another chapter to this, but if its as good as the last 3, I commend you.

Favorited, Thumbed Up, Watching.

god damn you for writing this so well

d...dear god.

there was only one story on here that even evoked a tear from my eyes and that was my little dashie.

this one made me break down in hysterics.

MANY MANLY TEARS WERE SHED THIS DAY.

Congrats sir, congrats.

-jamaca627

ps: make more good things in your life

And now comes the correction person.

Might want to spell Hole correctly all 3 times

"

Together, the 9 ponies lifted the coffin, and carried it over to the whole which the elder pony had dug out for Rainbow.

Slowly, they lowered it on the ground next to the whole.

"

Oh... oh, you're serious...

For real? Rainbow Dash's move that ends up going wrong and doing her in, is called the RAINBOW KILLER FLASH???

Do you have ANY idea how lazy that makes you look? And I swear, if you've realized why that name doesn't work, and play later in the story like the characters think it's ironic, I'm going to bury this story alive.

There's irony, and then there's insulting my fucking intelligence...

so much rage this all i have to say

DON'T EVER BE ALONE.

A very good story so far can't wait for more.

She was still alive, and conscious no less.

"Help," She mouthed.

That was the part where I knew that tears were going to be shed.

amazing job, Thanks for making me cry on my birthday

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You people, you fuckin' people...

Are you serious? Do you just have NO critical ability whatsoever?

How is it not PLAIN as DAY that this fanfic is an avalanche of cliches and poorly structured melodrama with all the subtlety and tact of a sledgehammer to the face?

This fic should be retitled "Cry Cry Cry, the Fanfic," because that's all anyone does in this chapter. Every other paragraph we're being told that someone starts crying, or that a tear runs down their cheek. As I read this I envision a screaming, wailing infant and how, like this fic, I'd like to shut it up with a baseball bat.

There are more effective, less repetative ways to convey sadness. Fucking USE THEM!

>>11253311125331

You got first this chapter, bro. Author comments can't be first because they can comment before publishing.

>>11278071127807 Have you ever thought this might have been his first time writing a story? You sir, are a complete asshole. But if your so up-tight on stories, why don't you read Omnius's stories.

Thank You.

this is the only story that has ever made me cry... and i read my little dashie. no critiques other than a few spelling or grammatical errors. great story keep up the good work. i can't wait for the next chapter.