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CapNTilfy


A lovable goofball who delights in spreading positive vibes and writing stories. =3 (AKA Orangie1984 of Derpibooru!)

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Sweetie Belle wakes up to a heavenly scent. She doesn't know what it is, but she does know that she craves it.

(This isn't my usual fare, but A: I'm bored. B: Writer's Block and C: I've had this idea in the back of my head for a while now.)

Featured 3/8/19!

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Comments ( 43 )

...why did I read this?

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Curiosity, perhaps.

This was... not the most random thing I've read on this site? But it was still very random. :unsuresweetie:

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I wasn't shooting for most random. Just random in general, since I usually write Slice of Life.

Just for the audacious Shaggy Dog, I had to give this a like. :facehoof:
Too funny Capn! :rainbowlaugh:

Lol... not bad. Not bad at all.

That ending though. . .

:rainbowlaugh:

how is this not featured

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Your guess is as good as mine. *Shrug*

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Looks like it was and I missed it! It's on the first page of the Featured Bookshelf. (As of this post)

Fucking hell, that ending :rainbowlaugh:

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You're welcome! :pinkiecrazy:

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But there was no laughter. There was only, "...wat."

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Oh don't get me wrong; it was enjoyable. It just left an overwhelming feeling of "...wat" and a sense that I'd never get those two minutes back.

What......?

Well, I'm glad Senpai noticed her. :|

I just woke up, I had time to read maybe 1 short story before going on with my day and this is what I read...

I'm really not sure how to describe what I feel now...

10/10

What did i just read????????

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A fanfic, you goofball. :pinkiecrazy:

Yes, I know that was a rhetorical question. Just wanted to answer you anyway!

That punchline was a thing of beauty :rainbowlaugh:

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Thank ye kindly. :pinkiecrazy:

Errr okay then .. slowly backs away from story

That was an almost painful feghoot, yet still thoroughly enjoyable. Though now O can't help but wonder how Scootaloo recognized the smell.

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"Feghoot". I had to look that one up. XD What made it painful? I'm always open to constructive criticism and any opportunity to grow as a writer!

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I meant it in a good way. It's not every day I see a case where it's not a pun, but an acronym. Somehow that made it even worse/better.

Yeah, with this kind of story, condemnation is praise, at least when it comes from me. :derpytongue2:

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XD Wow, thank you! I'm honored.

i facepalmed. so... success?

My emotional reactions step by step

1: Confusion
2: Mind Broken I...uh....why?
3. OY VEY FACEPALM
4. Stress by putting everything together
5. Laughing in pain
6. Crying AND Laughing in pain
7. Urge to send this to the woman I'm talking to so that she can experience the emotions

Rarity nodded. "Indeed. Everypony goes to crazy lengths to be noticed by S.E.N.P.A.I."

i’m dying...

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Thank ye kindly. ^_^

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