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This story is a sequel to The Most Dedicated Student
Sunset Shimmer goes to Ponyville to check the preparations for the winter moon celebration and make friends. But, Daybreaker escapes from her prison, and it's up to Sunset Shimmer and her new friends to go to Everfree Florest to find the Elements of Harmony to defeat her.
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So, if you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism:
The idea of doing an alternate continuity/universe is always a fun one, because it means you get to explore new possibilities and what-if scenarios.
That's also kind of the issue here. You've changed the names and appearances of the characters, and that's about the extent of it.
The events here are more or less a shot for shot summary of the show's first episode, and from what I can see so far, the characters act much like their canon counterparts. I think you need to stop and ask yourself: "What happened in this continuity that's different? How does that impact the events to come?"
I'm very mixed about this.... Sour Sweet is more of a split-personality kind of girl & Sunny is more suited to be Rarity than Lemon. Decent chapter, but... meh...
Rescue mission time!
Great chapter
Great chapter
Great story.
Damn it. I was hoping this story followed the tv show. I'm not happy
Now, that’s what I call a role reversal for Celestia and Luna.
I bet that when you get to "A Royal Problem", Nightmare Moon will come in.
So, Garble is this world's Spike. Interesting.
shell, hull, hull: body, hoof, hoof
pegasus: pegasi
I keep imagining the day in the background of the play in my head. It's so hard to remember that one detail!
the back hull: her back hoof!
🎵Story of my life...🎵
Six.
"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words can never hurt me."
"I don't like your mane."
"WAH!"
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Lunar guards
"You little foal." Daybreaker sneered. "Thinking you could defeat me? Now you will never see your princess or the moon. The day will last forever!"
Ok so I'm gonna take a wild guess, the alt. version of the mane six are as followed:
Am I right?
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Yes, you are right
You see daybreaker
friendship is not something anyone can Defeat
Because so long as someone has friendship
The harmony shall stay strong
Its the same in equestria as well as earth!
Loyalty honesty laughter kindness generosity and magic
No matter its 6 7 or 8 elements
They all create the same power
Friendship is not just power or magic!
FRIENDSHIP IS INVINCIBLE
AND IT POWERS OUR WORLDS