More Please

9481638
I agree with this guy

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Alright, I'll start working on a sequel...once I've updated some of my other stories.

9481659
That's fair

9481659
Please sir more, I'm willing to wait. On another note ruby won't be getting away with not doing homework with a teacher for a stepmother?

9481679
she will not be getting away with that no.

More punchy has a dad now and this will make the story even more exciting

sequel please

Damn your cliffhanger! Sequel, now!

sequal you have me hooked on this series

I now want a sequel from Ruby Pinch's POV.

Sequel

Say what?

9482473
What a twist

Sequel please

9486469
Don't worry a sequal is on my list to make, just need to give some attention to my other stories

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Personally just at this point he feels like he is a bit of a push over to the girls being a bit over possive. I could just be reading it wrong thought :p

9490010
he is a wee bit of a push over.

cant wait for the sequal

9505000
it's gonna be a while, a month or 2 maybe

9505039
I can wait

9506055
still waiting?

Well read the entire story, and I don’t know what to say. I enjoy Spike stories most of the time and this just had a lot going on.

Overall it was rather go. Some errors here and there making me think you were slightly drunk while writing these

And the characters as most are background characters the personalities are up to you. And the balance of their persoanilites being rather similar at times. And I am glad near the end the drinking was toned down a bit. I could see their being a one chapter epilogue (unless you already wrote it and I missed it) with Ruby explain how she came around and how she feels about her new family.

I would give this full story a 7/10 mustaches out of 10.

9536821
that rating is more than fair.

9536665
yes

Sequel? This just gets more and more interesting.

Most excellent.

AYWAL is incorrect. AWOL is the acronym, it stands for absent with out leave.

chanting sequel

9613361
alright calm yourself, I'll release the Sequal when I finish Riddle me this.

I'm also reading Riddle Me This. Very good.

cant wait for the sequal you really know how to right a good story

9625331
It's a work in progress, It'll be one of the next 5 stories I make.

MOAARRR!!!

9625354
You faking liar ¬_¬

9646345
It's a work in progress

9646423
Yeah I know, because that's what everyone says

9646441
fair