A newborn open its eyes and sees - uncomprehendingly - the world for the first time. It has to rely on others to protect and nurture it until its ready to go off and face its own challenges. Unfortunately, for this pony, she only has herself; waking up in a forest with no knowledge of her past or indeed the very land which she inhabits, she will have to brave many trials in order to find the answers to her myriad questions.
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Now this is very interesting. You've a marvelously descriptive turn of phrase, and an intriguing premise. I'll be fascinated to see where this goes.
And might I note, it's refreshing to see a unicorn actually use that natural weapon bolted to their forehead. Sure, it's not going to shatter stone or smash bone, but it'll do fine for goring.
Just look at what Celestia did that one time.
Good so far.
neat.
This story seems interesting. I wonder what happens in this story.
I'm interested, looking forward to more.
Should I be expecting any plot twists here?
Oooh, interesting start! You've earned a tracker.
On a side note, I seem to remember a story with a startlingly similar premise, except involving Rainbow Dash. Is this a rewrite of that story?
You know what would be really cool? If you make this a crossover.
Jojo!
Is it dead?
This has a certain je ne sais quoi quality that I am really enjoying, be it your use of unusual words (I never heard of xanthous before) or your vibrant descriptions. Anyways, I am just curious as to the status of this story. any knowledge would be welcome.