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When a nasty bout of feather flu renders Fluttershy unable to model for Rarity at an important competition in Canterlot, she is forced to turn to another one of her friends at the last minute in order to find a replacement. Unfortunately, the replacement comes with a few ... issues of their own. Will the show be a rousing success and another feather in Rarity's cap or will Applejack's lack of refinement lead to strife between the two?

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This is great. A little surprised AJ didn't slip into her Manehatten learnings.

Is this finished? It works as it is, but it could support more chapters.

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agreed, it would be great if there was an epilogue even if saarni left the details of the competition in the air, it would be that extra cherry on top if saarni gave us a hint at the outcome of the event.

Great story, you should write more. It reminded me of writing my paper about art. I saw many similar works on the site artscolumbia.org/free-essays/art/ and now I want to read more of this. So thank you for the inspiration to write a new article about art and literature.

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