Cadance finally gets Shining Armour to tell her how he really got his cutie mark.
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Mmmyep, that story makes perfect sense.
That makes more sense
And funny at the same time
A really cute story :)
loved it.
d'awww!
my heart exploded at least twice!
Little baby Twiley!!!
I've read this story before...
Still has all the d'aawwww.
How adorable.
AWWWW you need to write a sequel about the visit! :pinkie happy:
LOVED the story.
That was undeniably cute man.
^^^Twilight pulled a face as if to say, “You idiot, I’m Twilight Sparkle.”
Shining chuckled at her expression slightly. “Twilight Sparkle is far too long.”
Twilight relaxed her face as she agreed with his sound logic, returning to the curious wonderment that most newborns tend to have in their eyes.
“How about I just call you Twilight?” he asked her.
The small Unicorn appeared not to like it, as was determined by a small frown curling on the ends of her mouth.
“Okay, okay. Not Twilight. What about Twi?”
The filly seemed angered by this suggestion.
“Definitely not Twi, then,” Shining said quickly to calm the angry Unicorn. “How about…” He tapped his chin thoughtfully. “How about Twiley?”
Twilight seemed pleased by this, according to her showing her brother her gums.
Shining smiled at her. “I'm glad we’ve sort that out, Twiley.”^^^
Holy shit! Twilight's only a baby and she's already judging and contemplating things!
This seems believable enough to be part of an episode!
Silver out!
Not the most perfect of grammar, but dear Celestia and Luna, that was adorable. You gave me one heck of a smile when his cutie mark showed up. Good job! Brush up on the grammar a little and you'll have an excellent piece!
Luckily, I've had diabetes for 27 years, so I'm immune to your diabolical attack of sweetness! HA!
Y'know, that whole flashback type scene used to be far better when I mentally wrote it a few weeks back. Shame I didn't ever write it down...
But Hey, I'm glad people enjoyed this!
I guess I'm not the first person to have this idea, am I?
For I'm pretty sure you've never read this version...
I was kinda expecting a slightly different response, but I can't for the life of me remember what anymore!
Also, 1040631, you;ve read this before?!
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Y'know, I was never really thinking about writing a sequel to this. Maybe a spinoff involving Twilight's birth and including this scene, and going on about the rest of her life until Ponyville (kinda like how I've done that "My Little Rainbows" story of mine), but not a direct sequel.
But, you've got me thinking, and I have already begun formulating a way to combine both of these ideas into a sequel-esque. And thanks to my fairly erratic atention span, I may just HAVE to start! *sigh*.
Don't get your hopes up though, I'm working on far too many long fics at the moment, so it may never come to pass... (but you never know...
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I know the feeling, trying to focus on my one fic while planning for two others.
It happens. Good job all the same.
1046188 Well, yea, not your version. But Shining saying he'll protect Twilight no matter what in the hospital, I remember that. I just don't know exactly where.
Your story is still ad'awable though.
So good love it so cute
and... i don't know how to put my thought in words