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Oh that last line is gonna come back to bite her. Or I could be reading the story wrong . Great work!
I kind of expected the twist given how careful you were about only referring to the paperwork as "the certificate," but that didn't make it any less amusing. Looking forward to whatever follows.
9373542 Apologies. It was erroneously marked 'incomplete'. This was just a one-shot for the Jinglemas contest. I don't have any (immediate) plans to continue it. Though I do enjoy the pairing.
But thank you, just the same.
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It's a tongue-in-cheek play on the modern term of 'partner', similar to the bit from the movie, 'American Beauty', and how Hasbro treats them as 'best friends' in the show.
"Lyra, did you just assume snow pony's gender?"
Also, I didn't suspect that after ticking all the LyraBon boxes something in this fic would catch me off guard, but I didn't see that business partner thing coming...
I kinda agree with lyra on the mechanical approach.
That's why utility kilts exist.
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Eeyup.
You damn troll!
Knowing the Strongest Writer in the World, I should have seen that twist about the meaning of "partner" coming.
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God fuckin damn it!
I'm conflicted on whether to give a like or not
Dang it Bonbon!
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9374064 Well I haven't given the like yet. Ha! Wait, ignore the yet!!!
*bangs head* I fell for it. I thought they were talking about being romantic partners. You got me.
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I expected the bait and switch. Was half expecting the double switch, with the parents objecting to ethical perils of having a business partnership with your own wife.
9374236 A two-fer twist? Why not?
9374082 How about now with the new ending?
9374270 I think it would've been better to have it with the inital release. But still funny. You get the like.
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Oh, hello, desk.
You’re in the way of my face .
I was about to hit "Like". But then I read the author's note. I mean, I hit Like, but... You owe me a new mouse.
Holy shit, I actually saw the business partners punchline coming!
But you know what? You still made me laugh. Now I'm a follower.
A cute little ending. Wished I read this before Christmas though. Well better late than never.
I had a giggle.
Also, Tear Jerker is kind of a horrifying name for a pony. Especially if they chose not to write sad stories.
It's kinda like naming your horse kid Low Serotonin Levels and expecting everything to be okay.
I like it when you can pull a fast one on the readers. Like I did with the Prologue of As Hard As Velvet. Nicely done.
Bad idea to mix friends and business. Clearly some evil stallions have fucked them into a state of levity.
THEY'RE COMING FOR THE TITLE FROOT HORZ!