There’s only one more night until Pistachio goes with Rarity to Manehattan to be her guest during Fashion Week. He’s starting to get hype to hang out with one of the famous ponies in Equestria but at the same time he never went to Manehattan. That wasn’t until he heard someone outside and unexpected meeting the Gift Givers of the Grove.
Thanks to Daniyel099 for editing this.
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/292246/Daniyel099
Uh. Yeah. Christmas ended quite a while ago my man...
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Don’t mention it, people post Christmas stories outside of December and this wasn’t supposed to be about Hearths Warming.
This story's actually really good.I hope you'll post more stories soon!
9411598
Yeah... Great story though.
Nice story,
9412247
I’m trying to get a better editor, quit with the forced criticism already.
9412401
I know and I’m finding them but can you town down the criticism? It’s not making me feel any better.
9412414
I don’t usually write stories like I used to anymore but at the same time I want to have fun writing them since they will never happen in the show. But I’ll try to make the quality better.
I like the concept, but aside from the obvious flaws, the reindeers don't quite feel in character. I want to like this, but I'm sorry. It's just pretty bad.
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I tried to keep them in character but it’s too difficult.
A simple read but you shouldn't have Pistachio repeat the lesson he just learnt from the deers. It kinda feels repetitive that way.
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He was talking to his parents so they will understand.