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the tree of harmony gets sick and is dying, but unable to tell the main six and the pillars what to do about it, she takes matters into her own branches and takes DNA samples to make some one to take her place, this is that filly's story.
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Good chapter can’t wait for more plus I wonder if Crystal star will be immortal but overall nice chapter.
Also nice cover picture really fits the character for Crystal star.
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Thanks I made it myself, and I'm glad you like it so far.
verry intresting, can´t wait for more
all this on a tablet, good work so far
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Thanks and I hope you'll like the next chapter
well only one way to find out :)
An intresting consept and I like the wey diss seems to be going, but it allso feels a bit ruched.
It could do whit some more scen description. We know where the scens take place but we dont "see" what is happaning we only get dialougs and some minor things a few charackters are doing in the moment but we dont "see" the moment taking place.
An ex. would be too when they enter the cave whit the tree:
1. What do the cave and the tree look like now that the tree is sick?
2. What are the varius charackters reaktion to the tree looking so sick?
Expand on things like this and the story will become more alive and more enjoy able to read.
Looking forward to more.
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I hope that this is continued
Interesting, would like to read more.
Love it can’t wait for next chapter
when will the next chapter come out?
Oof. This starts as a wall of dialogue. Very off putting.
This is a pretty interesting start of a story so it looks like Harmony is gone but it left a newborn baby pony with the main 6 and the pillars Starlight glimmer and Spike but it looks like they chose Starlight to keep an eye on the new born baby name Crystal star and hopefully giving the little one a better future for Equestria so I wonder what's going to happen next guess we'll find out next time
Good beginning, but slow down the pacing a little.
It looks like the tree of Harmony has its own name tag you can use