Professor Philena Ivy, Pokémon professor of Variations, finds herself alone in Equestria as an Alolan Ninetales. Thanks to Arceus moving all Pokémon and "worthy" humans from earth. What will she do now that her life has changed? And was it a change for the better?
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8078084 yes she is a totem Alolan Ninetales. As for how she knows the moves it is part of her knowledge as a professor and instincts. Also what do you mean rushed, do you mean the wording or how fast things are happening?
8078290 hmmn, well not much I can do about that really it was kind of the perfect storm really. I do not like writing extreneous and overly detailed fiction after I saw the panning things like birdemic got for it and I tend to cut boring or irrelevent scenes. Add to that I was also writing to a time scale based in another fic, also add to that the location I ended up putting them in was largely deserted as well as the fact a large part of the chapter was battles. I can see how that screwed me over. It'll be slowing down in the next chapter, at least I'll try.
Hm. A good start. Needs some editing done. Though my thoughts are with Reversed Koala. Things seemed quite rushed. I understand that the Professor would know a lot about Pokemon but to be able to use Ice Beam and to adapt so quickly. Not sure to think if that's good or bad.
Still, keep it up. You've got potential.
8078953 -_- sigh it is edited, i have two who have edited proof read and waiting on the third cause he's busy. Aside from the pacing is there anything that was missed?
Flow could be improved a bit, but overall I'm quite enjoying this story. I do feel the need to point out that the Dratini at the beginning is the dumbest Dratini ever, of all time. What pure Dragon-type Pokémon picks a fight with an Ice/Fairy-type Pokémon and expects to win?
yay finally one with the awesome ice/fairy fox
Before I read this, what is the Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
I give it a chance again, I just hope there aren't to many main chars, like 6 Pokemon main chars and that it is Pokemon X Pony for once.
8079126 Didn't mean to offend you. It's still a great start regardless you should be proud.
A good start and definetly something to keep an eye on.
Don't be to badered by Darkstone and Koala they are just tring to help, and I know how hard it is to find the sweetspot between dadding and moving the plot along.
8079629 Answer: How dose animals get diner in the wild?
8079629 implied vore, limbs being ripped off, ensanguination, shredded into itty bitty pieces.
I like the story so far keep it up see you next chapter
8079321 the kind of Dratini who doesn't know the type of what she's attacking, the kind that now resides inside Ivy as fat, nutrients and protein.
I really hope the romance is pokemon x pony and that there aren't to many maim chars in here.
It is sad for the dratini but a yay for me. I was affraid it would became her friend already.
Why is it always a huge amount of pokemon friends?
I admid I started to enjoy it when they started to joke around, but I normally don't like it if their body is changing them. I hope that only meant that Ivy actually liked Ryoko and only her body made that feeling stronger.
I think I stop reading, I don't likr the idea of the characters to actually be able to get that horny, that they would let themself get "claimed" by any willing Pokemon.
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I have an idea but I am waiting on zues' reply to a question before I do anything regarding her.
I do not know
well they are pokemon to say they wouldn't be affected by their new bodies is silly, because humans are affected by their hormones, while not to the extent pokemon are or would be.
as for the actual attraction, it is based on Ivy's actions for Ryoko, while Ivy is was more interested in Ryoko's cute personality.
it isn't just any random pokemon, it does depend on the pokemon doing it. in this case Ryoko is doing it largely because Ivy saved her and shown to at least care. there are hormones driving the attraction and the need she is feeling (as with all love and attraction) but she could choose to suffer through them. but when Luka is mentioning other pokemon(not Ivy.) doing it, he doesn't mean that Ryoko would willingly let them do it or even have a choice outside of fighting them off.
it should also be noted that Ryoko isn't "Horny" during this event her body is expecting Ivy to claim her because that is what Ivy seemed to do at first anyway. also Ryoko is making a conscious choice to be claimed.
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Well okay, maybe I still give it a chance, it is just I have seen it often enough going exactly that way, which is causing me to leave sooner if I think it happens again.
In a way your maybe right and I'm not sure, but since they are cartoon characters and even if there are wild pokemon, in the show they act often enough pretty odd so maybe it doesn't have to be like that. I mean that the completely act like animals, giving in to every urge or not being able to do something against it.
I actually like it if the humans turned "anything" actually starts to act a bit wild, I only have something against the heat cycle thing that I thought it would happen here or in other stories. Often enought I get the feeling that the author didn't managed to show that they actually like each other and make it look like it was just to solve their problem with their urges.
Maybe I should describe my problem with the body change a bit better.
Okay there are two stories which did it kind of in the worst way for me.
1. a human got Bluebloods body and he got the Human ones. It seems that Blueblood raped many Mares and even if the Human didn't wanted it to do, he "accidently" did many horrible things and cried himself to sleep because "of his body".
2. a human turned Cadance got a god that forced him to live her life and abandon any wishes he may has, his new body made him got into Stallions and forced him to have a crush on Shining armor.
I have a hard time to only believe a body change would be enough to abandon every feelings, ideas or morals you had before to be honest. I accept that they maybe are there, but I don't think that they always just have to follow it.
Then they are "special pokemon since they were humans before and since it is fantasy, there is no proof it would have to completely work that way.
I don't know how it normally goes and I don't remember the relationship arcerus and celestia have, but it is kind of brave of him to demand anything from the ponys, when he is kind of invading another world.
I understood that the others aren't allowed to harm them in anyway, of course that they aren't allowed to kill anyone is pretty much normal, just the way how he is speaking even if he probably has no right over this world.
8084326 basically Celestia is at first hostile to Arceus but eventually warms up to him, but that being said she actually manages to get quite a lot of concessions from the god and he seems to accept her demands like a hundred percent of the time though tends to be a bit tsundere about it stating he can do what he wants.
this isn't confirmed but zues might be intending to ship Arceus and Celestia. and his whole demands thing only gets a reprimand from 'Tia in the main story.
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I only do the heat overpowering reason thing as a comedic bit and isn't serious. but this isn't what is going to happen in this fic as pokemon don't experience heat and there is only going to be one pony x pokemon ship (as long as it doesn't interfere with Zues' main story.)
in biology feelings are caused by hormones they aren't static and are the most maleable
the only thing that would be even semi static( I say this because memory fades and newer memories replace the old based on priority) after a change like that would be memory.
Ideas and morality are not static sure the change happens based on external stimulea and experiences but they can and do change, especially due to changes in points of view and new information or events that bring them into question. (unless the person is so closed minded they refuse to change and grow)
Man that was good can't wait to see the next chapter keep up the good work
poor Tia she is dealing with a lot of stuff she really didn't want to get into
8097729 pfft i only ever played a demo of that game so I'll take your word for it.
8097711 yeah poor 'Tia.
More :D?
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I agree with u, Celestia does have a lot on her plate if I was in her place I'd want to take a bubble bath too and calm down and relax. Please upload more chapters soon as u can. I love aloan Ninetales
When is the next chapter coming out
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Likely awhile as I work through other chapters and get them off to my poor editors that can't keep up with my output.
Update
Will you update or is it dead
Update?