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This chapter didn't really do it for me; nothing about the writing as such it's just I can't keep track of which one is Lotus and which one is Aloe because my brain is like that. That being said, this:

After only a moment of that, the yelps returned, but now with an edge of pain. She pushed a hoof back against me. “Stop, stop, it’s too much.”

I slid out of her as gently as I could, and gently caressed her shoulders and neck with a hoof as her orgasm ebbed away. Finally she stopped twitching, and her panting ended with a sigh.

This is awesome and things like this should appear in more clop. Lovers are not psychic, and during sex you may end up doing something that doesn't feel awesome. This isn't a terrible thing or a poor reflection of your skills, you change and do something else.

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1379213 The perils of writing twin ponies, haha. Glad you liked that bit, though.

I bow before you, oh great pony of the Norse. You are truly a man among men.

...aiming my penis at Lotus in time for the next thick white rope to trace a line from her neck to her nipples. Aloe used both hooves to direct my shots, stroking my cock as she did so.

Fancypants cum cannon ! GO !

I really enjoy these stories.

That was an amazing chapter, Norse. One of the best pieces of clop I've read in a while.

1384251 D'awww, thanks.

1386033 1388281 I'm glad you're enjoying them.

1391204 You sir... are brilliant. Well and truly THE BEST short clop stories I have read. Bravo.

This was just wonderful. Such a great story, and some of my favorite ponies. I hope you write some more of these.

Please, please keep on fighting the good fight: good, hot, ethical, kinky porn matters, and it's rare, and that makes it doubly a delight to come across.

... Er, that came out wrong. There are no liquids on my screen. But still!

1539843 Thanks very much for the kind words. : ) It makes me happy that people like what I'm doing here.

1435542 Aww, thanks!

1528763 More are in the works, I'm just easily distracted.

I would like to add my strenuous approval to the list.

Also, a request: so far they've only hooked up with mares. A stallion or four would be most excellent.

This makes me jealous, because I want Fleur to myself