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Let's see what happens...commence read.

Slow day...what do you know Cherilee, and what would have been the opposite?

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Yeah I like it

Damn. Hardcore stuff. Brilliant :trollestia:

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Oh wow, I'd love to see a not-so-slow day.

Hats off to you, my good sir. I say, good show! :twilightsmile: *Said in horrible british accent.*

Oh, noticed a typo on second read-through:

Fleur gave a sly grin, wiping some errant cum from her lips with the back of a hoof. She pushed her nose into the air, and then decreed, “fuck her into a coma, lover. You can do me afterwards.”

Needs a capital, I think. Otherwise, I didn't see any mistakes.

1575189 Actually, it's part of the previous sentence.

Fleur gave a sly grin, wiping some errant cum from her lips with the back of a hoof. She pushed her nose into the air, and then decreed, “fuck her into a coma, lover. You can do me afterwards.”

It's all one sentence. :twilightsmile:

At least I think that's how the rules go.

Hoooo buck. bucking... Bucking shiesse!

1575215
No, it needs to be capitalized. Structurally, it's all one sentence, since the dialogue is basically serving as the object (i.e., Fleur said X, with X being the dialogue). In terms of punctuation, however, dialogue needs to be constructed almost as a sentence within a sentence.

She pushed her nose into the air and decreed, "Fuck her into a coma, lover."

"Fuck her into a coma, lover," commanded Fleur, "and then lick my naughty bits." (This, obviously, could be rearranged back to the standard S-V-O order, i.e., Fleur commanded, "Fuck her into a coma and then lick my naughty bits.")


...wait, did I seriously just go all English major on a clop fic? :facehoof:

1575814 Ahhh, okedoke then. I'm still not so good at the writing stuff :twilightsmile:

Nah, you're fine. I was actually pretty impressed at the overall quality of the piece. Well-written porn is a true guilty pleasure. :twilightsmile:

Fine jeeze, no fap November sucks anyways.

1573084 That wil haunt my dreams for years to come.

1575825 You're better than a lot of newbies out there. Out of curiosity, who's your pre-reader?

1576820 Pre... reader?

I think his name is Anonymous Pegasus. He lives inside my mind.

R.D. Approves of this fic. ----> :rainbowkiss:

Well, fuck. That was some fucking, and if you are going to suggest that as a slow day, even sarcastically, you must write a follow up of a non-slow day.

There's a typo in the chapter title.... Shame on you!

Edit: It's been fixed now, it seems. The 'n' was missing.

Pegasus bro check the first word of your description.

Damn, that was pretty awesome. :rainbowkiss:

I think there is a typo in the first story title.

Menage à trois => Meage A Trois (7th Nov)

dafuq did i just read?

Words can not even begin to describe how much I...love this...:heart:

1577568 Actually, menage a trois is a term that is loosely used to refer to a threesome.

Looks like someone knows how to party...

1573084 That picture is damn horrifying D:

1577722 I know but look at how it's writen, you wrote : meage a trois, instead of menage à trois.

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What is this I don't even

(No offense to the story or author, though. But this is just... what?)

Wow I like this but it breaks my little baby mind.... :flutterrage:I DON'T CARE !

Well.

It's been a while since I've read a fic with the combination of quantity and quality of clop to get me off without needing to go read more. This is without a doubt some of the best clop I've ever read.

MOTHER OF LUNA!!!
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I'm going to read this SO HARD!!!

1578286 That was either the greatest Freudian slip ever, or the worst pun ever.

1578296
No, read at school.
1. Open up web browser
2. Go to FiMFiction.net
3. Go to this fic
4. Read said fic
5. ????
6. Profit
1578289
Go with the former, because I couldn't find a pic that didn't have the words Mother of God without it being a huge picture.

1578311 But teachers do not like pony sex :fluttershysad:

1578328
They are in denial.

i dont speak french very well, but DOES THE TITLE MEAN A THREESOME???

... note to self, turn on 'mature' BEFORE checking featured ._. but still, that is good >_> <_< >_> i was never here

Probably the first decent clopfic I've ever read :moustache:

And a question for those who have been reading these longer than I, does the shame of reading these (and just reading) wear off soon enough? :unsuresweetie:

I don't know what to think.

Not only was that well-written and incredibly naughty, but the whole slow day part made me raise an eyebrow. :derpyderp1:

SLOW day? :rainbowderp:

You need to write a second chapter.

whats with the recent rise in clop fics....Oh and I saw this in the feature box and the new stories box at the same time

1576623 Isn't it No Shave November? Because if it's No Fap November then I already broke the rules! :facehoof:

Wonderful plot by the way! :twilightsmile::trixieshiftleft:

1573084 Omfg that's the funniest shit I've ever seen. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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