Anytime u need a idea. Ask and I'll give a few points. Same with info on killer mentality.

bittersweet, good ending!

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Thank you, I may add little bits for each of the elements passing, but that's only a possibility.

That ended better than I thought it would

Good ending. Feels are good

"Well Cadence, your girls smart as a tack. Hope you were watching."

I believe you may mean sharp as a tack, no?

This totally caught me by surprise and I loved it!
Wrapped up pretty well, and kept me reading the entire way through. Thanks

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Thank you! I love comments good bad or indifferent, so reading yours made me smile. : )

I liked the Dead by daylight spin, the cadence savior thing was a bit unwarranted and kinda fast but the ending was nice.

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I didn't want to make another two chapters to sum it up. This wasn't meant to take over some of my other projects. I may patch and change later, but I was mostly happy with the end result.

Feels, man.

"ALL ABOARD THE FEELS TRAIN! NEXT STOP - MELANCHOLY HILL!"

Not bad. Not bad indeed... I like it.

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Thank

nice story

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Tank

Memento Mori as in the Ace of Spades’ exotic perk? That Memento Mori?

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Memento Mori as in the ancient Roman saying meaning you to will die. Said to be uttered in their rulers ears to remind them of their own mortality

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Dammit

Will done. I really like the rule about why you need to test people how ascend from mortality. Very clever, and understandable.

Oddly enough this is a really adorable story

very pog yes