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Dark Star the Crazed


I am the Boogeyman, punisher of naughty children and the older brother of Krampus. FEAR ME!

Comments ( 12 )

Is this "Shikabane-Hime" getting the Displaced treatment?

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Pretty much, kinda... Without the Shikabane Himes.

I wish people would leave feedback.

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First: yay!

Second, try reading your story aloud to yourself. There only seem to be a few errors, and they're of the type that are easily fixable. Hearing your own words (or listening to the sexy robot voice) can help pinpoint errors.

Lastly, loving the story! Sounds fun and funny, sexy and interesting. You've got me hooked! More please!:pinkiehappy:

hmmm updating two stories sounds difficult. Let's get down to the specs of this story so far... It's an alright fiction. The punctuation needs more effort but, the rest is alright.

For character Development

is very good I like how you put their backstory for the first chapter to see how it goes for your future chapters.

*sees that your a cock tease* 🖕 😡

Great work keep it up

It took me a few moments before I realized that the worst thing ever had just happened. "Awww!!! I wanted details about the wedding!"

I have to agree with Cadance, that they left before she could ask about the wedding is the worst thing ever :ajsleepy:

I am also very interested
Identity... Was he human costumed as a shikabane or a changeling that simply died?
I would like to hear more dialogue and explanations I love explanations
Your story makes me more and more curios
I cant w8 for the next chapter :D

When's the update coming up

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