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Dark Star the Crazed


I am the Boogeyman, punisher of naughty children and the older brother of Krampus. FEAR ME!

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I really wish people would comment about why they like my stories...

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So you ask, and I shall answer. To be honest, I haven't read anything about the Team SASA story. But, the reason why I like this story, and why I'm going to read the sequal story to this, is because I like Sunset and the Dazzlings a lot. I always see different authors handle their characters differently and I'm curious to see how you handle their characters. Also, I like see people's perspectives on the Anon-a-miss comic.

Holy shit, that was dark. This is just what I want in a prequel to one of my favorite stories on this site. And don't worry about having a f***ed up mind, we all have those moments.

Please, keep going, this has me entranced.

So will we see the entire thing even the bit where Sunset punched Rainbow's face, and will the other four go to prison?
also what about Twilight will we see her reaction to that last message and her confronting the Rainbooms?

You gave me a new reason to hate Rainbow Dash, thank you friend (already hated her before this fic and before discovering this site)! I will track this story as well, but I won't lie to you: I am way more interested in Team SASA's adventures in Remnant. Of course, doesn't mean that I won't enjoy this story as well.

It always good to know what happen to SASA before ending up in remnant. But I got to ask, is the story going to end when they die and go to remnant. Or will it continue a bit in remnant until they reach Beacon and the start of the main story? Of course you don't have to answer if you worried about spoilers.

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Oh, the other four are going to go to prison, or juvenile hall really, but I have something... Special planned for Rainbow... And yes Twilight will be getting a few words in...

Whew glad the arrests were made quickly! Didn;t want it to linger or take alot of time.
Well Rainbow been arrrested, now we just have to have the CMC confronted and expeled hopefully?!

Twilight made the right first move, smacking Rainbow. Also, if they used Sunset's journal to message Twilight, shouldn't they have seen Sunset's messages to her? Wouldn't seeing those have made them have a bit of doubt about who Anon-a-miss is? Or did they just not bother to read them?

Also, is this story going to be completed before SASA is next updated? Because I would be totally fine with that.

that was so satisfying
MORE <3

'No choice? You were the one with the pipe I your hands.

'In your hands'
by the way, nice introduction to the story, although what crime was Sunset farmed for?

Damn pony magic making me making me remember I have a conscience...

'making me' once please.

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Anon a miss. What the Crusaders did is technically cyber bullying. Which is a crime...

Aria snorted. "I've been all around the world cowgirl, I don't need magic to beat the shit out of you. I'm highly trained is several styles of martial arts and can literally break even bone in your body in under thirty minutes."** Applejack's grip loosened at the lack of emotion in the Siren's voice. She wasn't trying to intimidate the cowgirl, she was just stating a fact.

Ok, I was terrified of Aria before, but now I'm........shit, what's a fitting stronger word than terrified? She's entered Street Fighter levels of fighting skill now.

Some of these styles include Krav Maga, Judo, Hapkido, Jiu-Jitsu, Taekwondo and Muay Thai.

Correction, Mortal Kombat levels. Are we 100% sure she's mortal?!

Also, dat ending.:pinkiesad2:

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Is she mortal? Could a fusion of the current and golden age Green Lanterns be beaten with a number 2 pencil?

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Don't know enough about Green Lantern to make that call. But I want to assume the answer is yes, he can be beaten with a number 2 pencil, so long as the writer of his story is holding it.:trollestia:

In all seriousness, what is the level above God-tier? Because I now want to see Aria fight either Qrow or Tyrian.

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Green Lanterns are weakened by the color yellow and their rings do not affect it

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Wait, so you really could beat a Green Lantern with a Number 2 pencil? As long as it is large enough?

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Pretty much, that isn't even counting that the golden age Green Lantern ' powers were week to wood!

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Wow, that is stupid.

So they still don't know who Amon A miss is yet, can't wait for them to find out.
Can the CMC get more then detention for several months and lost of cell phone computer priviages?

Like to see them expeled and forbiddened to be together for life.

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Oh don't worry, I shall rain divine punishment down upon the sinners!

And you shall know my name is the Lord, Bitch!

"That would be Sonata's doing. I'm not sure why, but when we moved in she insisted at we paint seven rooms, each in a different color of the rainbow." Sunset just kept her eyebrow raised, though she slightly cringed at the word 'rainbow'. "My bedroom is yellow, hers is blue and Aria's is indigo. I'd let you have the orange, green or purple rooms but they are a bathroom, wreckroom and a room we use for storage, respectively." Sunset opened her mouth to respond when someone rang the doorbell.

I'm sorry, but what? That seems random, even for Sonata.

Also, Sunset's allergy made me LOL!

 Aria always wanting to use violence to solve her problems. 

I think that the Link fits with her. :moustache:

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Nah, I Burn is Yang's theme, and Aria is so much better. Give a listen to Hell to Pay by Miracle of Sound, now THAT is a fitting song for Aria. I also think that Aria would listen that type of music, heavy metal.
Here, free link to it!

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Give a listen to Hell to Pay by Miracle of Sound, now THAT is a fitting song for Aria. 

Just did. Fits her alright!

"and the fact that we lost you twice during the operation "

Doctor admits Sunset's heart stopped twice on the table as an offhand comment? Wow. What a dick.

Nobody comments on this? Uhm....okay then.

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This specific doctor decided long ago not to sugar coat anything. He once told someone they had a year to live without even blinking.

good start

a bit rushed though

:rainbowderp:what are you going to do gilda?

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Paralyzed or Petrified would work, I believe.

For Gilda nad her goons... The coroner will have a field day with the bodies

Go Sonata! The truth is found by one purple princess by way of logic(No! Really?), and now the backlash will commence next time.

"People don't change Twilight. She's a no-good, lying, snake in the grass who honestly deserves whatever she gets. Rainbow went to far, but I won't lie, I probably would have too had I been there."

So Applejack just admitted she never saw Sunset as a person and thinks that people don't change. Ironic, considering she just got her friendship destroyed by a frame job again and is more interested in butting heads than actually solving problems. Then she goes as far as saying she would've killed (or at least attempt to kill) Sunset as well... I really hope the next chapter continues with the conversation, especially since the CMC were just outed as Anon-A-Miss in front of the others. Too bad Twilight isn't tech savvy enough to record that conversation.

Applejack looked at the ceiling for a moment before steeling her nerves. "No. I didn't, and I still don't." Applejack ignored the gasps that came from her fellow humans and matched the glare that Twilight gave her. "People don't change Twilight. She's a no-good, lying, snake in the grass who honestly deserves whatever she gets. Rainbow went to far, but I won't lie, I probably would have too had I been there."

Ojh apple you stupid stupid stupid stubborn fool

Applebloom tried to calm herself and opened her mouth. "Yes." Applebloom looked away once she saw the utterly destroyed look on Applejack's face. "It was my idea, I started it and brought Sweetie and Scoots on board later. How did you figure out it was us?"

Well what do you say now..you INBRED PIECE OF FILTH

Screw applejack, "people don't change", that's bs. I bet now that she knows bloom is a non amiss, she'll say ab will change.

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Given how the original comic ended, that is almost certain.

Applejack looked at the ceiling for a moment before steeling her nerves. "No. I didn't, and I still don't." Applejack ignored the gasps that came from her fellow humans and matched the glare that Twilight gave her. "People don't change Twilight. She's a no-good, lying, snake in the grass who honestly deserves whatever she gets. Rainbow went to far, but I won't lie, I probably would have too had I been there."

And the award for biggest, pig-sleeping, country based arsenut, blonde-haired wanker goes to....APPLEJACK! SHOW HER WHAT SHE WON MITCH!

If SASA Heard that with their gear... There will be an opening for Honesty

Applejack looked at the ceiling for a moment before steeling her nerves. "No. I didn't, and I still don't." Applejack ignored the gasps that came from her fellow humans and matched the glare that Twilight gave her. "People don't change Twilight. She's a no-good, lying, snake in the grass who honestly deserves whatever she gets. Rainbow went to far, but I won't lie, I probably would have too had I been there."

...Okay. Applejack doesn't just need to get over herself...She needs to be dragged away and locked up before she hurts someone.

She thinks she's high and mighty due to being honest? That makes her above others? Try beneath. She's exactly like Gilda: an arrogant, backstabbing psychopath who doesnt give a **** about anyone but herself!

"Now, you are going to call your friends and the three of you are coming with me. We're going to where Sunset is staying, the three of you are going to ask her for forgiveness, afterwards we are going to go and find Principal Celestia and you are going confess to her. And if the three of you try to weasel out of any punishment she gives you, not even Faust herself would be able to protect you. Do you understand?"

I love this badass angry twilight.:twilightangry2:
Is this on the sub group of Anon-A-Miss Tartarus hath no fury like Twilight Sparkle scorned yet?

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I aggre. This charecter flaw mostly appers in the show. It dose occasionally appear in other stories. I never really noticed that Applejack puts herself on a pedestal for being the element of honesty. And with an attitude like that she needs to get her as# off of that pedestal and realize that she is not some perfect incorruptible being.

I DEMAND MORE.:flutterrage:

please
please
please:fluttershysad:

Because this is freaking AWSOME.

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