A Christmas to Remember

by TwiPON3

Darling, That's a nice... What is it, First?

Twilight had just stepped through the portal and got reoriented when she noticed Rarity decorating the room some.

"Why are you decorating?"

"The snow just gave me-" she noticed Twilight's coat, "Darling, I've never seen anything like it!"

She was caught off-guard by the complement before she remembered Sunset's gift.

"Oh," she walked over and put the coat and hat in her chair, folding it in the process, "It's a gift Sunset gave me."

"It's rather beautiful and exotic."

"It's from somewhere called Russia."

"An exotic coat from an exotic place," Rarity said, "It's magnificent."

"You can wear it, but you might want to do it in the freezer."

"Why?"

"Remember the snowstorm that time we were in the Crystal Empire?"

"Yeah?"

"It's more for wearing in that kind of cold."

"What do they make it from?" Rarity said, looking at it.

"I'm... not really sure," Twilight said as Rarity returned the clothing to it's previous position.

Author's Note:

I don't know what's happened to my train of thought lately, but I think this story's about gone to shit because of my thought pattern. It's probably going to be on hiatus for a while if I can't come up with something good soon.

Comments

[Speedy Silverstreak]

What about me and Zecora's second bet?

[TwiPON3]

Soon. I Pinkie promise. I just don't quite know how to do it yet.

[diablo4000]

I agree, this story has gone down the drain. i decided to try and give it another try....i regret everything now.

You have Applejack and others go SUPER SAIYAN ULTRA MEGA BITCH on Sunset after confessing she tried to kill herself.
Then just gloss over them getting chewed out leaving a very unsatisfying ending to that.

You would done better in going into detail and having her tell their families over what they done, and what the CMc have done.
I'm sure Granny smith be dragging both granddaughters out to the shed and whacking them good with a apple branch, and Pinkie's parents will be doing the same to her.

[TwiPON3]

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Well there wasn't much detail I could've put when she was chewing them out. Maybe someone else can write the Anon-a-miss parts where they fit in with this better. I wrote a story, people wanted me to continue; Okay. It turns into something that it was never intended to; Ehh, still okay. Trying to keep the thing together at what I think is beyond repair in every sensible universe; God only knows... Plus it's not like I can go into much detail about someone chewing five girls out for what, from my perspective at least, appears to be their fault.

I'm sorry, but Anon-a-miss in this one was supposed to be Sunset tries to kill herself, is taken in by people who give a damn for her, it's obvious to her that the rainbooms were bitches to her, end of it.

My apologies for where I went wrong in this.

[TwiPON3]

9385810
Fiction is only a universe we don't live in, my friend.

[HB_DS2013]

What Rarity and Fluttershy don't know won't hurt 'em...

[TwiPON3]

9385885
About what the coat's made of?

[HB_DS2013]

9385891 Pretty sure red meat's taboo on account of the red meat being sapient, but white meat and seafood are somewhat fair game. On a side note, though, they'd both freak out if they ever find out it's made from bear fur. It's also a bit redundant since most races in Equus already have something keeping 'em warm and clothes are worn for status anyway,