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Jackelope
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Jackelope
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And I salute you, Captain. Har Har
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Neat! I'll go give them a read then after an hour perhaps.
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But if that's what you want I'll oblige. 
I don't mind.
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It's all good, friendo.
Bah, I don't think anybody will think you one regardless, I certainly don't.
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Have a good evening, Cap'n. 
You're welcome, although I'm not sure what's for!
Magnificent, it felt like I was reading an NTR visual novel with multiple endings. And the best part is that I didn't have to read hours of text just to get to the good stuff. Though I was also expecting an harem ending, but this is just fine.
I saw some grammar mistakes, but nothing too jarring. Certainly better than the average fic on this site.
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You know you can just edit your own comment, right?
Anyway, there's a typo in the description: it says "... lust is high, but as is their love" the but shouldn't be there
S'ok.
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Whilst I'm not too great a fan of NTR, cuckoldry and all its denominations, I thoroughly enjoyed writing this fiction. Believe it or not, there was genuine discussion between me and the requester of 'Very Bad' and 'Very Good' ending, the latter of which would have Chrysalis succumb to Thorax (the opposite of what occurs in the bad ending) but I felt that the fic was already too bloated as it is unfortunately. As for grammar, I'm very weird with it, and for that I apologise. I went over the editing myself but most likely due to my haphazard understanding of it, I'm probably still making tons of issues that I don't know about. But I'm glad my errors weren't too awful enough to sour your enjoyment of it too much. 
I'm glad you enjoyed it
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I have since rectified it! Hope the fic was to your liking.
Thanks for pointing that out
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S'alright
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Different style, not really my jam but not awful; what can I say?
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I completely understand. I wasn't taking offence to your comment, if that's what you think. Not everyone has the same kinks. Personally, I could take or leave NTR, taking it so long as it fulfils specific criteria and leaving it in most cases, but I digress. Thank you for leaving your thoughts.
Going from chapter 5 of Changeling Mating season to this was a bad idea...
Great story tho lol
And then Ember smiled and her eyes flashed green. The end.
I think the Good ending is best, if only because it feels like Chrissy still wins in a "defeat." 'All according to plan' style.
Poor Thorax and Ember.
This reminded me of the concept of "Karma" and the pagan "Rule of Three"
Karma: The positive or negative energy you put into the universe will eventually return to you.
The Rule of Three: The positive and negative energy you put into the universe will be eventually return to you tripled.
This is the bad ending...