Loreley never asked to be put in a high position of rulership as the Queen of the Dead... and yet here she is.
She never asked to possess the power to have complete control over the dead... yet here she received it.
Now over the years of quiet solitude and ruling over all the dead, she has grown distant and prideful for no friends exist for the Queen of Death and unfortunately, she hates immortals and those who fear and/or cheat death.
If things turn out differently, maybe she might feel some sort of wholeness in her empty void that she calls her heart.
Co author Lunar Flarion
Edit: Featured on September 18...... I have no words for my thanks
Very catching story
it sounds like a fun story
Hi viper, your story is looking good so far. Keep up the good work.
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thank you
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No problem.
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I like what I see
Just started reading and gotta say, I'm already loving it
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I'm glad you like it
He hasn't introduced himself yet
Also who is the 'scary monster?'
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Ahh my bad
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that would be discord for the second question
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Makes sense
I know this pict from YouTube..
Nightcore city of the dead
I like that one
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As do I in fact that song inspired this story
Did you forget the third or meant two things?
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I honestly forgot the third. Hehe I'll fix that write away
This is the 1st time hearing this song and i love it thx
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Upon reading the section in the context of the story it makes sense and I meant just the two with her friend making a joke about the third one but if you wanna know what the third one would have been here
"And finally for the third one is learning how to manipulate weak-willed individuals through subconscious brainwashing, death threats, and intimidation. This one takes in the form of careful yet quick thinking and specific phrases and actions."
I think I have a theory on how sombra turns evil in this universe... if he does turn evil in this fic
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I would like to hear it
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When loreley confronts celestia and luna she (somehow) loses and gets imprisoned. While that was happening sombra was watching, and he grows angry and vengeful against celestia and luna for imprisoning his 'mother'. After that happens he trains himself to become stronger, and eventually conquers the crystal empire to help him against the princesses.
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O.o how did you know?
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Are you being serious or is this a joke?
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You will never know
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Well technically I will once you tell me in the story
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Details
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You caused this... also a few of these have nothing to do with what you said
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And now for my favorite one
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Waffle
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I have no regrets
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This one has nothing to do with what you said, I just thought it was really funny
Link is too long
So that's you explanation on why sombra's horn is red?
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Yes
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K
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the long answer is Loreleys blood is cursed to stain whatever it touches. But can be removed after a nice bath of salt water and mint.
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Ok, I was actually wondering about that, I just didn't have time to type out a full response earlier... although does that curse also include regrow ingredients limbs like when sombra's horn gets chopped off in the season 3 opener?
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If Sombra does indeed live a thousand years
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Well depends on how much you are willing to follow canon
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Not much
I think I'll leave this here
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I approve
9636643
Awesome song and quite apropos
Nice chapter. Though there was a part where the section repeated itself. Other than that, nice work.
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fixed hehe sorry about that
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No biggie, sometimes they sneak past any writer.
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How true
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There is another section where it repeats itself
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Umm could you possibly point it out?
This one
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Thank you
Hey guys, Frost here. I’m glad to see that this chapter is finished. Can’t wait to see what’s in store for the future
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Nice icon