The Power Bimbos take on the seductively sinister Love Bunny
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Nice, very nice. I loved how you handled this chapter for sure. You did a good job in writing Pinkie and showing her in her first fight. How she has her own natural talents but still has alot to learn. I do wonder how Spike plans to fix up that belt of his, He should keep little power shots of his cum for the girls to shoot back for a quick boost in combat lol. I did like the 'magical' duel with Twilight and Trixie. I do wonder tho... Is there more there maybe between Trixie and Celestia than we know? Also I wonder how Twilight will feel about this, I mean this also gets into my feeling about Raven as well. That Twilight just showed up and is getting all of this down really fast while many seem to have spent their lives working on this and struggle to get close to where she is. I know we can't let other's talents define us. But in this story we get the chance to see this from the side of the talented one and those who have to struggle. I consider Spike to be another that has to struggle. Hell Twilight can't even seem to remember his name in the middle of combat. What about when more of the girls show up? Or what about those who have to work so hard to get anything while it all seems to come second nature to Twilight. Either way I like all the angles this story can go from here.
Loving the story so far. Not a fan of Pinkie's look, but not every fetish is meant for every pervert.
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To be fair to Twilight, Spike doesn't even have a hero name. He hadn't come up with one yet. Just sorta going with the flow at the moment.
As for Twilight's power? I envisioned it more like Ichigo from Bleach. Much like how he received his own zanpakuto and achieved bankai through unorthodox methods, so too has Twilight. Perhaps I could have explained that better? Trixie's dilemma stems from other things though. I will be getting into that. Probably much later.
While it won't stop me from continuing to read this story I'll most likely skip any of sex scenes involving Pinkie in the future.
I think I'm gonna like Pinkie as a chubby speedster; I can't wait to see what kind of mischief she'll get into, especially if it involves Spike. I liked the sexual battle we got out of Trixie and Twilight. I'm hoping Spike as an Orm will be a match for the beefed up Diamond Dogs in the future. Nice cameo of Meadowbrook in this chapter. Now I kinda want to see a spin off chapter of Trixie and her friend getting the cake licked off of them.