Dashie's Big Mistake

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Rainbow Dash pranks the wrong pony, and the consequences are humiliating.

Just a random wee Drabble that popped into my head.

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superfun

superfun #1 · Nov 18th, 2018 · 1 · ·

I kind of hope this gets a sequel where Dash DOES find a way to prank her mother, Rarity, AND the entire town (for laughing at her), but in a way where not only does she get to have her revenge, but everyone ends up enjoying themselves enough so that Dash gets away with it.
That way any damage to her reputation this might have caused has been reversed.
Plus, I don't think Dash would let something like this go unanswered, not even from her mother.

(I realize that probably won't happen, but I ended up reading this out of curiosity, and ended up feeling the need to at least get that basic idea out)

Yosh-E-O

Yosh-E-O #2 · Nov 18th, 2018 · 2 · ·

Windy definitely plays for keeps. Though I'd expect no less from the mother of Rainbow Dash.

You kept the suspense of what was going on for the whole story. I didn't know what was going on, what was going to happen, nor what would happen if Dash was 'found'. I initially believed Dash was going to do her planning in the Party Planing Cave unaware her deed had already been done.

Perhaps this is why she keeps her pranks to Ponyville?

Fun little story. You flesh out the parenting of Dashie's parents.

TankCop

TankCop #3 · Nov 18th, 2018 · · ·

K first the art is Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!

and 2nd the story is just amazing I love it keep up the amazing work.

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Ryshinki

Ryshinki #5 · Nov 19th, 2018 · · ·

Lol funny.

Viper Pit

Viper Pit #6 · Nov 19th, 2018 · · ·

this was sweet here have a like

Friendly Spartan IV

Friendly Spartan IV #7 · Nov 19th, 2018 · · ·

What the masses think of this fic...

NinetailsCreativity

NinetailsCreativity #8 · Nov 19th, 2018 · 1 · ·

I like it but I just wish it was longer I'm left wanting more. great story!

PrincessColumbia

PrincessColumbia #9 · Nov 19th, 2018 · 1 · ·

I liked this quite a lot, but I felt the ending was a bit lacking. The gist was good, but compared to how well the rest of the fic was written it just feels too compressed and flat.

Ereiam

Ereiam #10 · Nov 19th, 2018 · 2 · ·

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Agreed. A few more lines at the end describing with a little more detail Rainbow enduring her punishment and humiliation (by showing her friends' reactions, for example) would've been welcome.

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