A former Royal Guard pony is moving to Ponyville to live with his little sister, and the orange scooter-riding filly couldn’t be happier. But is the Guard ready to give up its best blacksmith? On top of it all, a familiar enemy is out for revenge, and can 3 brothers put aside differences (and grudges) to buy the time the elements need to stop it?
Teen because of later violence, not sure how bad it's gonna be but I just wanted to be safe
DISCLAIMER: only consistent to cannon for seasons 1 and 2 , don't hate me for inconsistencies with season 3 cannon
Chapters (7)
For the record, this is the first story I've ever written outside of school so I apologize if it is REALLY bad
anyway, let me know what you think, criticism will not be met with immediate destruction
Hmm... You have an interesting concept. I'll follow it for now and I'll be sure to read it once I'm able to think straight, then I'll let you know what I think of the story so far.
first chapter and big mac aint happy. damn, firestorm needs to clean himself up.
For the record, I am working on the next chapter, I've been busy and I'm trying to slow this down some and I'm trying to think of good filler. So chapter 4 is coming, slowly but surely
Edit: And I just realized I've started both of my comments with "for the record"
I assume that Firestorm was honorably discharged. And are there no more smiths in Canterlot?
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He resigned, Mac was just drawing conclusions cause he doesnt like Firestorm and Shining Armor thinks of it as the same as treason, and there are other smiths, but he's the best, and Shining Armor's friend
omg a update, i thought this had died.
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Yah sorry, I got distracted by school and hadn't been online in a couple of months
1970931 np, i know how school can side track people, im in the middle of writeing my own story but havent gotten to it yet in a couple of months
Lol Mass effect salarian special forces line
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That was one of the few specifics I knew I wanted to do from the very begining
So here's my Pi Day present
Not my favorite chapter but oh well
Please continue. It's really good and I'm really eager to find out what happens next.
Oh, this is really good.
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Thanks you two!
And don't worry, I'll keep writing, just might take a little while