A hidden room. A dusty doll. A simple rhyme. Who knew that such a small list of things could ruin Diamond Tiara's life? It began with a "tick" and ends with a giggle. Will she be Tinker Toy's friend?
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That is a sort of poem I know well.
For it is, in fact, a magic spell.
I kind of hope she will be more than one of those killer dolls that needs to be stopped in the future, but i still like the idea.
It was written well and I kind of hope she is a bit scary, but in the end I hope she is on their side, maybe something worse will happen that changes the doll at least slightly?
I know nothing right now and need to take another look at the description, but I kind of want the myserious doll to be more.
I'm curious if I care enough for that character in the end to have some kind of sequel focused on her. If she should do only bad stuff in this story, there is still the chance that her priorities change in a second story.
Oh I like it. I have to say it again it would top it somewhat, if a possible plottwist would be that Tinker isn't that type of evil being that only can be destroyed or whatever.
I have to image a situation in which for whatever reason they have to defend themself frmo some thiefs or a Villain group that want to wreck havock and Twilight and the others have to deal with the situation that Tinker maybe just killed a few living beings.
For now I don't mind the evil little doll thing.