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I can't say this is unexpected, but it's still disappointing. I didn't want or expect her to mope around for 10 chapters, but the whole interaction felt very stock. I'm not sure if that says more about the characters or the situation, but it still felt like something I've read a dozen times before.
And I still can't quite get past Phillip's attitude last chapter. Soarin does a good job of sanitizing things, but regardless of his circumstances what Phillip did was ten kinds of not-cool, and it already feels like it's considered water under the bridge.
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I agree with you on how Philip was acting. I do feel though as people who are reading pony on human romance stories/smut have a different opinion on human x anything else interactions that someone else.
I will say I wish that this chapter took place over a few days to lead up to the heart to heart talk, but having 8 chapters of mopping doesn't help.
Only other thing I can think of is that I wish we could get into Philip's head during this.
Yeah, Fleety got into a deep funk there. Can't say I'm surprised. I'm glad Soarin' checked in on her. He made a good point. I feel this chapter helped put things in perspective and better show Fleetfoot's thoughts. I'm glad she's coming up with a plan. I'm still a little pissed at Philip though. I too wish we could 'hear' his thought process some how. I look forward to the next update.
I have a feeling the next chapter is going to involve fleet Duck taking Phillip to a chair to have a serious conversation about things.
Please though tape him to a chair for the comedy!
Hmm, are rainbow truffles canon, or is it possible that the author drew inspiration from this lovely story?
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I wouldn't put it past him, but who can say?
It's good seeing fleetybee putting her head on straight.
[Commander Shepard intensifies]
Soarin It really was fantastic that help.
with a friend like that the world would be much better.
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One would be surprised at how well another knows them, even more than themself when they need a talking to.
This is the best portrayal of Soarin that I've ever read.
No, honey, it wasn't. Definitely not. Not even close.