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Ahhh! There we go~ can’t wait for the sure to happen fluff!! (Of course with further character development) ! Keep it up my dude!
The invincible pegasi, and a great way to break the ice for a first meeting.
This is beautifully written. The description of her flying to music, as well as the storm rescue were choreographed extremely well.
Additionally, her inner monologues never seem wordy or forced. Definitely a favorite!
So that's how she saved his life
Great chapter and great story!!
One question:
" He blinks and shuts his mouth, and then latches a… hand around my fetlock as the other undoes the belt.
As soon as it comes free and both hands are on my leg,
If he grabbed her by closest (left in case she was getting him out of driver's door) hand and then unlatched the belt by other hand - they would tangle in the belt unless she was getting him out from the passanger's side. In stress I do not think he would have it in him to let go of her hoof once he grabbed it to get the belt over his arm. He would have to unlatch belt before grabbing I would think...
And thanks again for the story!
It brigtens my day every time I see new chapter published :)
That was no mere Sonic Rainboom. That was a summoning ritual, combining her desire to live a happy life with the wild magic that had been turned loose recently. She asked for the key to happiness, and the universe sent him.