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Another great chapter!
Another chapter! I love you!
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I know what his first performance will be once he's learned his new instrument.
And so the lie gets left behind,
The past, present, and future entwined,
We laughed, we sang,
We danced, we ran,
And now we’re back where we began.
Everyone's emotions are running all over the place, here, but such is life. And a beautiful segment of life is what you've captured here.
Most satisfying. Until next chapter that is.
Okay so here we are again seemingly back at the beginning of where this tale began (well sort of considering the other story too), but still I am not happy with this alternate world or “his” home world as what you have established before makes absolutely no sense whatsoever in light of who he is or where he may have came from. I do so hope at some point you will explain this. Otherwise every time I see this “human” world being brought up I am going to just skip reading about it.
Thank you for this one of a kind wonder of a story. Cheers, good writing.
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And now we wait...
It seems we are almost at the present timeline of this story.
Man this really got the feels out of me just a beautiful chapter.
This story will be in a special place in my favorite collection. I love the feels it brings to me.
Love this story so far eagerly waiting the next chapter!
This is satisfactory to my collection
It’s really interesting the sort of dynamics that Philip’s presence has caused. The guard ponies that were more or less assigned to be his minders are now some of his closest friends and now even Luna is trying to make amends.
The little bit with Celestia’s poor attempt to make the first peace gesture is also something that really stood out in the chapter and I’m very anxious to see where you go with her in future chapters.
Actually, now that I think about it, Celestia has never really shown up in any of your previous chapters (that I can remember) other than being mentioned in conversation. I’d be real interested to see how much further Celestia will go to try and undo the damage she has done and with this latest revelation, I honestly wouldn’t be surprised if she approaches Fleet Foot to act as a kind of ambassador of friendship between her and Phillip.
Welp, there it is. It's all out in the open now. Philip can make with it what he will. The gifts were all pretty amazing. Especially Fleety's. I couldn't help but hear her singing in my head to the tune of Bruddha IZ's "Over the Rainbow" cover. Really good chapter and I look forward to seeing how Philip's relationship with her comes along.
Holy molly this was a great chapter
Holy moly what a gem of a chapter. Its 2:30 am and I'm wondering if I can get away with reading more.
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Saaaaame. Just a nice mellow tune.
This was a fun birthday and the gifts were nice. The song was a nice personal thing, and those are usually good presents to get. And it's also good to have that nice cry to let you focus.
Is it strange I get a two note vibe out of the song.
Oh, goodie. Unas diplomacy. :D
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I didn't think anyone would get the reference.
I'll be honest, that wasn't the response I expected from him after Fleet's confession. I thought he'd be at least a little angry. This was refreshing.