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Chapter 1: Sunset's Life

5 years later

We then cut to Canterlot Palace, where a young Sunset is playing with her toys, while her older brother, Ash Magma, was practicing his fighting style.

"Ash, do you have to practice where I'm playing?" Sunset demanded, giving her brother an annoyed look.

"Sis, someone has to be able to protect you," Ash replied, not even looking in his little sister's direction.

"But the last time you practiced while I was playing, Mr. Fuzzy got sent to the Emergency Room!" Sunset pointed out, holding up her favorite teddy bear.

"I told you, what happened to Mr. Fuzzy was an accident, Sunny," Ash replied, adopting a remorseful look.

"You two were arguing..." Sunset reminded him, giving him a deadpan look.

"You know, I don't have as good a memory as you," Ash replied, trying to pretend like he didn't remember.

"Don't even try that, Mister "I like to burn down everything I see whenever me, mom, and my sister visit the zoo"," Sunset shot back.

"Hey, those Timberwolves were charging," Ash pointed out.


A few years later, Sunset was walking through the halls, her school work in her bags. As she arrived at the throne room doors let her mother, Celestia, that she had returned from school, she heard two voices on the inside.

"Son, I don't about this," Celestia's voice sounded off.

"Mom, you, me, and Sunset all know that with me going out on adventures all the time, I am not fit to one day take the throne and lead out people," Ash's voice replied.

"But your sister won't like this," Celestia pointed out.

"I'll explain it to her when I see her, mom," Ash replied calmly. "Besides, I could never leave without saying goodbye to her."

Sunset's eyes widened in shock, sadness, and anger. She turned around, and quietly stormed off to her room.

Later, as Sunset worked on her schoolwork, a knock was heard from the other side of the door.

"Enter!" she called out, her voice neutral, but her eyes betrayed her true feelings.

To her upmost annoyance, it was none other than her older brother, Ash Magma.

"Hey, sister," Ash said softly.

"Hmm," Sunset grunted.

"I just wanted to tell you that, well, I'm going on another adventure," Ash told her.

"Ok, you don't need my permission," Sunset replied, barely hiding the venom in her voice.

"Sunny, is everything alright?" Ash asked in worry, catching the venom in her voice.

"No, everything is fine," Sunset replied, not even bothering to hide her sarcasm. "Now get out."

"Sunset, what's wrong?" Ash asked. "You know you can talk to me about anyth-"

"Can I?" Sunset demanded angrily. "Really? When you're practically never around?"

Ash flinched at that last sentence, a shocked look on his face.

"While you're always out there adventuring, I'm here with mom, worrying if you'll ever come back!" Sunset continued. "You're not around anymore, and everytime you are, you stick around for a day or two, and then go off on another adventure! Three times you missed Nightmare Night, six times you missed Hearthswarming! And for what?! To go on some adventure!"

"Sunset, I-" Ash tried to speak, sadness all over his face.

"You know what?" Sunset interrupted, fighting back her own tears. "Go."

"What?" Ash asked softly, barely even audible.

"I want you to leave, Ash," Sunset said venomously. "Like you always do. But this time, don't bother coming back. Cause then you'll just leave again."

Without saying a word, Ash silently left the room, closing the door on his way out. As Sunset stood alone in the darkness, she threw her books at the wall in anger, not caring that her tears were falling like a waterfall at that moment.


Two years later...

We then cut to the day Celestia shows Sunset the infamous mirror, and when Sunset sees herself as an Alicorn.

A few days later...

After Sunset argued with her mother, she ran into the throne room, and while not looking where she was going, she tripped and fell into the mirror, unknowingly into her father's world.


Two years later...

As Sunset set to work on repairing the damage she had done, she started to feel suspicious, as if someone was watching her. As she looked around, she saw the figure of a man standing in the distance. He appeared to wear a suit with different shades of red, red tinted sunglasses, fiery red hair, and fiery red skin. As soon as a car passed in front of him, he disappeared into thin air. Sunset looked around, wondering where the man had gone. And why, as Sunset had noticed, had he given her a disappointed look?


Five days later...

The Rainbooms, Twilight Sparkle, Sunset, and Spike celebrated as the crowd dispersed. As Sunset looked to the leaving crowd, once more, she saw the same man from 5 days ago standing there, this time wearing a fiery red polo shirt, red khakis, and an approving smile on his face. As several students passed in front of him, once again, he disappeared.

"Hey, Sunset, you wanna come over ta mah house?" Applejack asked, snapping Sunset out of her pondering.

"Huh, what?" Sunset asked.

"Duh, we're going over to AJ's house to have a slumber party, silly," Pinkie replied.

"Oh, uh, yeah, sure, I'm down for that," Sunset agreed, still freaked out by the man that had clearly been spying on her.

"Is everything okay, Sunset?" Spike asked with worry.

"Yeah, I'm fine, it's just..." Sunset replied. "I thought I saw something..."

"What?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"It's nothing, it was probably just my imagination," Sunset replied, massaging her forehead. "In both instances, I was just tired and exhausted."

"Uh huh, if ya say so, Sunset," Applejack conceeded, not believing a single word of it.

"Well, I don't know about the rest of you, but I'm tired out of my mind, and would love nothing more than to go to sleep right now," Rainbow Dash said. "So let's skedaddle, before either we all collapse from exhaustion or Granny Smith accidentally locks us outside the house."

The girls agreed and left, not noticing the man that Sunset had seen watching them from afar.

"You have grown so much my child," he said. "I look forward to when we can see each other for the first time."

The figure then glowed fiery red, and flowed away, disappearing into the night.

Comments ( 57 )

I do wonder if the mysterious figure spying on Sunset is her father or brother? I look forward to finding out who it is, keep up the awesome work!

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted Nov 13th, 2020

"I want you to leave, Ash," Sunset said venomously. "Like you always do. But this time, don't bother coming back. Cause then you'll just leave again."

Damn, if the man/pony wanna adventure let him adventure.

Two years later...

As Sunset set to work on repairing the damage she had done, she started to feel suspicious, as if someone was watching her. As she looked around, she saw the figure of a man standing in the distance. He appeared to wear a suit with different shades of red, red tinted sunglasses, fiery red hair, and fiery red skin. As soon as a car passed in front of him, he disappeared into thin air. Sunset looked around, wondering where the man had gone. And why, as Sunset had noticed, had he given her a disappointed look?

So, he knew about her bullying and never stepped in?

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You're welcome.

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I know who it is already, *sing song voice* but I'm not telling.

Love it.

Sweet chapter.

Two years later...

As Sunset set to work on repairing the damage she had done, she started to feel suspicious, as if someone was watching her. As she looked around, she saw the figure of a man standing in the distance. He appeared to wear a suit with different shades of red, red tinted sunglasses, fiery red hair, and fiery red skin. As soon as a car passed in front of him, he disappeared into thin air. Sunset looked around, wondering where the man had gone. And why, as Sunset had noticed, had he given her a disappointed look?

I'm guessing that's Sunset's father.

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He never even knew she was on Earth till he felt the first magic spike in ages and traced it back to Canterlot Town.

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When you say ‘spike’ do you mean spike the dragon/dog?

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He means energy surge.

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Maybe... *puts pinkie finger to corner of mouth in true Dr. Evil fashion*

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Ok, that just makes me come up with so many questions.

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its her father obviously he said he can't wait to meet her for the first time, sunset never met her dad but she has met her brother.

Getting a serious Percy Jackson vibe from how the firebird is keeping tabs on Sunset

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Well the ending of this chapter does take place at the end of Rainbow Rocks.

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Uhh, yes that was the reference I had planned all along... *nervous sweating, eyes darting all around*:rainbowderp:

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So he sensed magic from spike?

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No he sensed magic from the Fall Formal Incident.

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So, he sensed the magic when sunset put on the crown?

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Seeing as how magic had pretty much been retired by that point in time, save Spring Sprite and all the Nature Fairies bringing about the changing of the seasons, Sunset putting on the crown was the largest spike in magic in a long time.

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I don’t think I remember those. Also, what does that have to do with spike the dragon?

OMG you did really good man keep it up and keep updating this story it’s starting out really good can’t wait for the next chapter

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Also congratulations you’re cover image got me to look up the Fantasia segment its from

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I was asked which Spike I was referring to, but I must have made a gramatically incorrect mistake.

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Yea, because it was a little confusing.

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So is everyone else who meets me.

Hoping to see more of this. :)




(Will someone help me with the emojis)

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Ok, do you see the top of the comment box as you're typing?

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Now what kind of device do you have? Computer, laptop, tablet, or phone?

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Alright, then move either the mouse or your finger over the right till you see a face that says "Emoticons". On your iPad, you may need to press a button with three straight lines that say "Show More" to find the face.

This is pretty good, probably should add it to the momlestia group fic.

Well so far and interesting and fun story I hope you do continue it.

Could you please update this story

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