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TwiRaptor


Gone For Good

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This story is a sequel to Alien: Twilight's Gashing Origins


"As long as Xenomorphs exist amongst us and continue to thrive on Equis. The journey that started on board Valuntas Station will never end" - Princess Celestia

Our Story Continues!! Mistilie Flare's plan to wipe out life on Equestria has been brought to a halt by Twilight Sparkle and her allies. Once the battle was over with, Twilight Sparkle used the powers of the Queen Gene to order the attacking Xenomorphs to take refuge in the ruins of Canterlot City. This command would cause the alien attackers to no longer spread death but instead, make a permanent hive. Only attacking ̷t̷̷̶̷̷͇͇h̷̷̶̷̷͇͇o̷̷̶̷̷͇͇s̷̷̶̷̷͇͇e̷̷̶̷̷͇͇ ̷̷̶̷̷͇͇w̷̷̶̷̷͇͇h̷̷̶̷̷͇͇o̷̷̶̷̷͇͇ ̷̷̶̷̷͇͇g̷̷̶̷̷͇͇e̷̷̶̷̷͇͇t̷̷̶̷̷͇͇ ̷̷̶̷̷͇͇t̷̷̶̷̷͇͇o̷̷̶̷̷͇͇ ̷̷̶̷̷͇͇c̷̷̶̷̷͇͇l̷̷̶̷̷͇͇o̷̷̶̷̷͇͇s̷̷̶̷̷͇͇e̷̷̶̷̷͇͇

If Only Peace On Equestria Was A Real Thing

Evening slipped into the long abyss and the darkness falls onto the ponies, malicious shadows forecasting doom, for the cursed animal, inhabits the precious Equis. When Twilight looses something that kept the beast in pony control. The Xenomorphs ...

THIS IS THE END

Artwork Created By NSilverDraws


THIS STORY IS THE FINAL SEQUEL STORY TO THE FOLLOWING SERIES OF STORIES

Alien: Twilight Signing Out

Alien: Twilight MIA

Alien: Twilight's Final Chapter

Alien: Twilight's Gashing Origins

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 40 )

Well This is only the first chapter and it sure didn't waste time blowing minds!

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I tried my best to make the first chapter a good one! I am happy you enjoyed it!!

Just how many stories will be in this series?

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I am thinking this will be the last one ... the story before this was supposed to be the very end. Later I discovered that with Xenomorphs on Equestria there is still room for at least one more story. So after ALLOT of thinking and preparation, I think this will be the final one because I think it still needs a proper end where there can't be any room for another one.

This is Bizzare behavior from Mistile.

Xenomorphs have really gone down hill if they're listening to Twilight. Or the planet has messed with how they operate.

I haven't read the series. Not sure if I want too since this is one of the more difficult crossovers to do right. Can I get an unbiased opinion here?

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Of course you got to read the story to understand how they even got here to start with.. but if you need a summery of some sort i'll tell you what i can based on memorys. the rest you still need to read yourself on how and why.
The xeno think Twilight is her queen thank to the genes inside of her. thanks to that they also see her as a queen. Remember Xenomopes are animals hive mind and of course your appearance don't matter if your DNA to them say your queen they must do as there queen tell them too. this fimfic crossover was made by a huge alien fan after all. i don't want to go into too much detell this being one of those kind of story best being read also it's best to read it in order before reading the side storys.

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If you think that blew the mind. Wait til you discover the truth, the next chapter has some surprises for you.

Okay bye sunset! say Hello to iron will for me plz! thank you!.

FUK this chapter man! everything just . you know! bad things! so many bad things! What a way to start the new year chapter! i'm excited for the next one!

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"Say Hello to Iron Will for me, Thank You" :rainbowlaugh:

I am glad you enjoyed the chapter!! I will be releasing the new chapter as soon as I can, however, don't worry
you won't be waiting forever this time. I promise!!

Comment posted by TwiRaptor deleted Feb 15th, 2019

Gyaaaaa worst cliffhanger ever!

:fluttercry: my soul is crushed....this chapter was just unexpected... not sure what'll even happening now.. just when you think you got this story figured out..

:fluttershbad: :raritycry::raritycry:

you enjoy our suffering. you must be!.. damn this story have so many suprises... and i'm happy to be part of this. as.. grim as this got.. what the hell are the heros gonna do now after such a lost?

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ME? Enjoying HeartAche?
I don't think I like that at all, Rahzzy.
(Extreme Coughing)

Ahh Well we all been abit close minded in our lives If you found out your crush was someone that you couldn't have an after life with. Or someone you believe was real? It come to a shock to you at first. But after so many years he may of apologized.. the worse part is. the last thing Rahzzy had said made of made her hate everyone and have no reason to be nice to everyone.. So Rahzzy might be the reason why she acted cruel to other.

times had change after so many years. and people can change. even androids with the capability.

nice work on all chapters so far.

It sure has been awhile sense I have gotten to read this series, however, now that I have caught up. I have but a few emotions that I need to share with you, TwiRaptor. :fluttercry: :raritycry: :fluttershbad: :applecry:

This series may not be the best out there and it might lack in some areas. You sir are still a very amazing storyteller!! This series has been an amazing read so far and I will be honest I have teared up from the most recent chapters.

Keep up the good work!!!

nice work looking forward to the end.

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Thank You, Glad you enjoyed it

This is the only story I read that ever made me cry so many damn times! SCOOTANUTE!!!!!!!

I can't believe this story coming to a close.. It's gonna be hard to say goodbye when this is all over. This story maybe one of the best I got into a lot of soul crushing moment.. the reminders.. Damn I love this story... I think it really suck it gonna end soon.. but I want closer now....and I can only imagen how this might end.. Come on twilight. if scootanute couldn't get out of this.. you're the only one left that lived the longest out of the others

"Silver Star screams for help but there is no life on Equestria available to help anymore" Even out of space, nopony can hear you scream.

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Thank You for reading!! Love the comment!!!
I believe Silver Star met the fate she deserved

Welp... it's over... I never been attact to a story like this.. 3 years of this story.. and I join way later to see something so amazing and.. Damn it this story.. It all tied up well in the end.. So many loses.... and so many wholesome moments and losing there home... they tried so hard to fight for everything they had.. but moving on was really only the best thing they can do... Everything was simply amazing. This is the only good xenomorphs FIMfic out there... When I started to first read this story. I was pretty unsure how this would be.. if it might be any good.. and to my surprised. I've falling in love with this alien twilight series, Seeing twilight try so hard to keep her home safe and trying to live.. In the end everyone lost everyone. But gain something memory's. Love. and a spark of hope to abending this nightmare once and for all. You made an amazing story twi.

And I"ll but defiantly coming back to re-reading this series.

Also this is my Ending credit for this... I personally feel like it fits soo well~ Credits

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As the author I can 100% Agree that this is the credits to the series! I am very happy that you enjoyed the series. Especially this much!! It has been a long road and it finally comes to an end, I can say one thing about the open ending to this series. Twilight Sparkle, is safe, she will live on, and there will be no more worry for her. After a life of pain and Xenomorphs, she can finally rest.

Thank You,
Rahzzy

Brilliant Twi. That was a hell of a finale. The emotions, the pain, the sorrow, it bled from the story to the readers. To me as I felt their hardships in this amazing end to a fantastic series.

Silver Star at last you die. In space nopony can hear you scream

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Where is Twilight going to stay at, if Equestria is gone? And what will ever become of Princess Celestia after losing so much?

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Twilight Sparkle will be safe, she will live on, and things are going to be okay. The alicorn won't have to worry about the Xenomorphs and there are colonies in other parts of space. Knowing Weyland Yutani and this universe tells us that there is something out there and they will find a new home out there eventually.

That is not saying that Equestria was the ONLY place affected by the Xenomorphs, as for Celestia and her fate. Some lights must be snuffed out in order to create new ones. Celestia, like others on Equestria faded long before this series came to an end. Shown in the flashback near the beginning of the series, Celestia sacrificed herself for others. Death still comes to even demigods ...

Thanks for Commenting

And that ... is a wrap

Sunset NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! TAKE OFF AN NUKE EQUESTRIA FROM ORBIT!!!!!!!!!! It’s the only way to be sure.

It’s so typical when it comes to Xenomorphs. They are so unpredictable. We see it in Aliens vs Predator 2010. They had all those Xenomorphs locked up, only to have them get loose. One day everything is under control, the next everything falls apart. They should never have learned about the Xenomorphs in the first place.

When ever White Lightning talks I hear him in the voice of Bishop Weyland.

Turning around from the building the warriors begin to wag their tails looking at Violet. One of the Xenomorphs in particular posing a bigger threat than the regular warriors. Violet focuses her eyes at the larger alien, immediately she could tell it was birthed from a Yak. The Xenomorph growls lowering it's head showing off ram shaped head, the warriors around the Yak- Morph reading their tails to strike. The Yak-Morph lowered its head charging forward like a bull, it's four bull like horns digging into the dirt ripping up the ground as it sprints towards Violet.

Is that the crusher Xenomorph? From the majorly disappointing game Alien: Colonial Marines?

"Wake up, Droid-13-9-19-20-9-12-9-5" A female voice echoes, so familiar but so foreign inside the mind. Shuffling sounds and White Lightning's voice chimes in.

Now that is one long android number. I don’t think Bishop had that long of a number.

Schwein rushes into the control room with wide eyes as the alarms become louder. Sparks flying past his head he pulls Aether out of the piloting chair for her own safety, he straps himself in to try and correct the issue but a second piece of debris smashes into the rear of the ship. Schwein's head smashes into the control panel of the chair and it almost knocks him out, however, he manages to keep himself awake.

i hear this alarm.

XenoTwi returns.

The queen’s perspective. That gives me chills. I always thought Xenomorphs had their own way of seeing, as if their head works like an eye.

That last part reminds me of this.

Final report of the Commercial Starship Nostromo. Third officer reporting. The other members of the crew: Kane, Lambert, Parker, Brett, Ash, and Captain Dallas, are dead. I should reach the frontier in about six weeks, with a little luck, the network will pick me up. This is Ripley, last survivor of the Nostromo...signing off.

What an awesome story. This whole series is just so good. Probably the best series too. I’m also writing some alien stories. But I don’t know if they will ever beat yours. It’s sad that’s it’s over. The feels, the Xenomorphs, Twilight and her Queen Gene. Now she is one of the only survivors of Equis after it gets infested. 10/10.

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Thank You for investing your time to read the series!

I am thankful you were able to enjoy it from beginning to end, reading through all of the comments you have made only pushes me to wanna write more. Even though there wont be anymore Alien Twilight Series ... Maybe. Sometimes series have a hard time dying, I feel like if I wanted to I could go one story further and have a Mistilie Flare prequel story.

In the end I would like to again thank you for reading,
This means the world to me!

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