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Tea Equine


Only the most refined fan-fiction for the sophisticated reader.

Comments ( 130 )

Very much liking this so far.

One thing though, I think it meets the criteria to be added to this group, and I've always thought it strange that we, the readers, don't need the author's permission to add their story to a group of our choosing. (As far as I know, that might've changed with that whole 'Applebloom fluff fic in all the bad folders' thing a while ago)

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You are correct. I honestly didn't know that group existed, but yes, it's an RGRE fanfic (some people don't know what that is so I tried to explain it in layman's terms). I've added it to the group now.

Great start, but I think the middle section got repeated... that or it's so similar I didn't notice any difference.

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So THAT'S why the word count was so off from expected... :pinkiegasp: Fixed now.

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I wanted to make a tea pun but I couldn't think of any

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A missed opportuni-tea is always such a shame.

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Don't worry! We all make mistakes. I just wanted to be sure you weren't telling the same scene from, say, starlight and Tom's perspectives seperately.

If that had been the case, we would have needed to talk about making retellings more interesting than a copy/paste, though...

Hmm a fascinating and quality story. I shall be looking forward to more chapters to come good sir. :moustache:

I like it.

Keep it going!

I demand moor I say.




But for real man this is top of the line.

I like this so far. I liked and faved it. Can not wait to read the next chapter whenever you get it done.

Tom struggles as a human in an Equestria where mares are the dominant sex. Stallions are traditionally home-makers while the mares make the money for the household. Will Tom conform to traditional Equestrian values or will he pave his own path?

This will probably be the reason why he is more happier with Starlight later, but is this again a story, where they usually tread the human the same even if he is not a pony and their world probably works differently for other species?

I haven't read it yet, but if it's true that Starlight will be the only one treating him differently because that's what she still wants to achive in this story, then this could be a story for me.

You have my interest.

one chapter in and already in the feature box. Congratulations.

Nice. You have my attention. :twilightsmile: Grats on the feature.

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Probably, but so far she seems to just be treating him as if he is a male pony, when it has been made clear he doesn't like being looked down on. As-is I don't see him developing any feelings for her until she changes her tune.

Someone add this to the reverse gender roles group

Yes!
Make Starlight being given the D! Otherwise she may devolve into a communist dictator again. Just remember the break-up with Sunburst ;)

This has potential. Also, add some Clop so I can add it to the Naughty Shelf, where this story should be.

Guess I've been around for a while. Guess this is pretty nice. He said 'guess' a few more times than I'm comfortable with but it is a good start.

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The title definitely reminded me of him, but I figured the comment section already had mentioned him.

This has a lot of potential! Looking forward to much more!:moustache:

Am enjoying this and can’t wait to see what else you come up with.

All I could think of during the pool scene was...

Decent set-up. A bit bare of description, but well-written. I'll be keeping an eye on this one.

I love a good human x Starlight fic. The RGRE is a nice little bonus, as well. This certainly has potential.

Have a like and a fav, good sir. :moustache:

He hasn’t even mentioned fashion or shopping once!

This has all sorts of amusing implications for Rarity in a role-reversed universe.

Read through it one more time. If you're going to try and stay on the front page I suggest you pay attention to what you spell or at the very least get yourself an editor.

Last line,

“Ok, then. Bye!” Starlight waived at Tom as she hurried out the door.

Should be

"Ok, then. Bye!" Starlight waved at Tom as she hurried out the door.

Sorry, I've become cold hearted in my years of being on FimFiction and posting some edit suggestions.

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Fixed. I appreciate it.

Is this a more sensible rgre? Because that's all I've wanted for a while. Can't wait to read more

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You're going to have to give some context for that one. Not sure where your baseline is. What do you mean by "more sensible"?

Honestly this is the first official Starlightxhuman fanfic I'm reading so far, this is getting up to a great start and can't wait for more!

Damn that was quick! I eagerly ate this chapter up. I don't know why but star just commenting on the oddity of their roles being revered couldn't keep my grin off my face.

"Yeah you have no idea what you're in for star" was my thought xP

yaay a new chapter

I really like how the reversed "gender roles" are affecting Tom and Starlight's interactions. Would love to see more of this story in the future! :moustache:

I'm all over this

will their be booze is their any other way to sing karaoke?

This is amusing to read.

This keeps getting better! Nice chapter.:moustache:

This is fun.

I wonder if Starlight is aware of the signals she's giving off.

Looking forward to more.

So far this is turning out pretty fun story, look forward to more.

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eh, like the ones where a dude is in a shack in the everfree and all the mares, rather than being guided by social norms, are just unreasonable. like, they have strokes when they see the protagonist get a small cut. I'm not saying those stories weren't enjoyable, they were funny, they were just a little extreme.

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I don't plan on making things too easy for Tom. And no, there are no plans for a Tom harem.

Also, no. I don't expect to add too many over the top reactions unless I want some comedic relief in there.

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For the record, I already think this is a better story. Even if you were to go that route I think I would still enjoy reading your story. Please don't rush! People will wait ages if the product is good. I can't wait to read what comes next.

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