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Cosmonaut


Writer/Artist who's been active since the inception of the fandom.

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It's up to the standards of good for porn in terms of story. As for the writing part, you're doing well, though there's some stuff that could and should be edited. For example,

His once roomy jean shorts groaned as his legs packed on supple layers of fat in his thighs and ass. Now there were no hints of wrinkles except around his crotch as the space inside was greedily sucked up thu his expanding assets. The sensation of massaging his needy pussy brought a silent gasp to his plumping lips. It was so good! His chest heaved and fell, the small breasts encased inside swelling larger with each breast. In minutes his buttoned up shirt was straining against a 34C cup pair of tits, the dark nipples having lengthened another inch and seriously tenting the fabric.

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I think you meant to just use "C" here.

Why no SEX tag ?

The funny part that i laugh that is good comedy. He was growing breasts that was funny. A stallion change into a mare I guess that is transgender... However that is really good and the story that leads up to it. I hope you keep going on it.

well if thats rumbles then appleblooms is gonna be just as intresing

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Ah dammit I missed those...

holy howdy this was amazing, i adore me some sluttification and tftg

A little saddened that the entire class didn't pounce on him immediately, but I'm sure there's plenty of time for escalation here. Looking forward to seeing Bloom's side to everything too, keep it up!

DING DING DING DING

Talk about being saved by the bell!

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do ruble and applebloom end up together becasue that would be one hell of a story to tell their kids

This is an image of gender-bent Rumble? Who is the artist?

A sharp pain flashed thru his head and Rumble winced for a split-second. Then it was gone, and Rumble could breathe again.

through

He could image their faces when comparing their willowy statuesque bodies to his sexy new curvaceous look.

imagine

Plus, I’m finally going to ask out Scootaloo.”

Come on... end these Rumbloo references. :facehoof: I thought you liked that other ship too.

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I see. So I take it this scene will appear in the story later.

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I sail multiple ships.

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Tho, you're too much focused on Rumbloo.

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No such thing as too much when its a ship you like. And I like it.

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technically it's tg which is supposed to be short for the same thing but TG refers to gender transformation within the transformation community, transgender is usually used to refer to other states of gender being.

(whistles)...wonder how AB's doing? I can only imagine what her turning into a hyper sexy young colt is gonna be like...

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Are you in for a surprise next chapter then

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She doesn't change at all? Or becomes just as endowed as Rumble?:rainbowhuh:

well shit applebloom done made a big mess she must of been really pent up

Applebloom sighed and sank into the plush sofa of Garden Delights outdoor seat. She was enjoying a light brunch with Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle on their off day from school. Tomorrow they’d be on and would all have to in. For now, the trio could kick back and relax. Or at least two of them could.

I think you missed a word.

“It had to be two feet long and thick at the base like a cola can,” Sweetie whispered,” it was even thicker at the base between my legs. So, I start touching it and stroking it and I keep guessing how long is but I kept guessing wrong. And it’s so warm and hard and throbbing between my legs, and he’s dripping stuff into the pool from the tip. Then Terramar asks if I want to feel how big he is.”

Quotation marks on the wrong side.
Keep is present tense, kept is past tense, which did you intend to use? Also, I think you missed a word between "long" and "is"

Interesting thing, by the way, is that I actually found this story originally through the pictures you drew for it.

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I'm glad you found it at all then!

Terramar? Fucking Terramar?!

You gotta be shittin' me... :facehoof:

...Daaaaaaaang, Sweetie...:rainbowderp:

watch rumbles potion not work because applebloom got her pregnant

Comment posted by Tide Hunter deleted Oct 5th, 2018

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Well, the images made for the story stated that, so yeah. Watch as it happens in the story.

okay who wants to guess how many foals those two will have whle this is going on my guess is 3

Don't know why I just suddenly had a vision of Granny Smith say 'bout time ya give meh great-grandchildren!'.

Comment posted by Tide Hunter deleted Oct 5th, 2018

Holy fuck this chapter was HOT.

I like this quite a bit, hoping for more chapters.

I hope this continues or concludes soon, I want to see what happens to those two

just gets better and better with rumble like she is

Comment posted by Tide Hunter deleted Oct 28th, 2018

Oh scoots has a giant fetish neat

This is one of the better porn with plot stories I've come across in a while. Love it

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i would like to see rumble in platform boots like those sexy goth ones

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