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Soaring Symphony
I'm just a simple guy who loves reading (mostly MLP fanfics) and hopes to be a good writer myself someday and, hopefully, also get involved with music somehow (notice the microphone cutie mark).
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Welp. It looks promising. Let's see where this goes.
Curious senses are tingling.
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The pixels aren't so bad. It is the very many jpeg artefacts that are the problem.
Awww...
Interesting idea for the story. Let's see where it goes.
Hopefully he doesn't get the idea to try it out himself to check if it actually fits...
Also, 9503186 is right. A few more pixels/less artifacts would be good...
I look forward to more of this fic.
Rumble: "Yeah, lemme grab some free stuff from this massively suspicious guy, what could possibly go wrong?"
It's alive!
interesting. Discord as Mephistopheles. funny, i actually knew it was him just based off the first description (of his hair as i recall)
I’m very curious if she’ll find the zippers ‘stuck’ once she wears the whole suit.
Wrong: This isn't going far enough!
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I know, and I agree. I was just trying to walk you all through Rumble's thought process at this point in the story.
My intent was to portray Rumble as being interested in all that naughtier stuff and wanting to indulge in it . . . but also being in denial about it at the same time. Hence why he's swinging so far in the other direction. It's an act, cause he want's to think of himself as someone respectable. It's not what he really thinks.
Sorry if that wasn't clear enough.
I fear she has a point there.
The story is on the way.
The only question is in which direction.
The real question at this point is, is the next chapter soon, or next year? XD this sort of 'flavor' of story is more niche than some would like to admit, and the writing, so far, is actually good enough to not detract from the emmersion any, so, kinda hoping for sooner than later, but this wouldn't be my first long wait either.
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I'm actually working on the next chapter right now. It should be done by this time next week at the absolute latest . . . probably sooner.
Oh, I'm honored. Thank you. It's great to hear that my writing skills actually are as good as I thought they were and it wasn't just some shitty 'Dunning Kruger Effect' of something
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yeah nah, I've already decided to give your other stories a closer look soon as I'm done with this chain of work days I'm on, clop or not. But it's good to hear you're already working on the next chapter.
Holy fuck, yeah!
This chapter was everything I was hoping for and then some (I thought Scootaloo would remain in the suit a bit longer, and wasn’t expecting that it’d merge with her and turn her completely into an anthro version of herself — despite the cover art — but I like that a lot nonetheless).
I can’t wait to see where it goes from there (since the suit is now part of Scootaloo, that means Rumble must now have complete control of her body, right? Oh, the possibilities…)
That's the spirit, Scoots!
Rumble: *squee*
I look forwads to how he will explain that to her.
Title of the chapter is misleading. Discord is not the Devil or a devil, he's a being of chaos not evil.
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Well it was the best I could come up with. I’ll gladly change it if you can think of something better.
Begging your pardon, but who's the artist of the story's cover art?
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I don't know the artist but I just PM'd you the link
If this is fun enough for him, Discord should consider giving these suits to more guys. The more the merrier!
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Great idea! But unfortunately, I plan for this fic to center around Rumble and Scootaloo's dynamic. But if you want to write your own fic around different characters but centering on the same idea, you're free to do so.
Also, you do realize there were a lot more toys at that sex shop beyond just the suit right? All of which were magic. Just thought I'd point that out.
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So you have no quarrel with anyone writing stories based around what you have started?
I have an idea that might be fun, I just have a few questions...
To what extent does the toy/item affect the user/victum? What limits are there for number of participants for using and controlling? Answer when you have the time...
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Honestly, when it comes to the specific toy Discord gave to Rumble, a lot of those rules and limitations will probably come up throughout this story. If that's what you want to write about, I recommend waiting until I've completed this story so you can have all the answers.
But like I said, Discord had way more magic sex stuff in that shop and my intent was for him to end up travelling all over the EqG world with it, as well as the multiverse in general (I wasn't sure how to work that into the story). So why not write about a different item for now? That way you can make up your own rules. The sky's the limit with this sort of premise.
Oooooh, better yet. What about an anthology fic about all the chaos that ensues from Discord's meddling. That could be fun.
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Okay, there are technically no rules. I was wondering because one of the ideas I had, that I might use is a slow conversion like if it is a dildo or a set of lingerie where it slowly converts the character into latex and they realize it too late to remove it.
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. . .
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Weird. Okay sure. Go right ahead. I won’t stop you. That might even be an interesting read.
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Hmm. I need to go over what he had in his shop then... So many toys to give the boys to give the gals.
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I think it literally says anything, I guess the limit is if it has a sexual purpose or not...
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Also, it cant be directly harmful to the user in anyway. At least, not by design. After all, as Discord said
That doesn't mean you couldn't go in a darker direction if you wanted to. Just make sure that it's entirely the fault of whoever's using Discord's toys and not the fault of the toys themselves. After all, Discord made them. And he's not going out of his way to hurt anyone . . . at least. Not on purpose anyway.
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So, nothing harmful, just fun? Well, fun for Discord to watch.
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Yeah, pretty much
Awww, come on!
Finally!
That's certainly not unintended, is it?
Well, he certainly wasn't the only one. (According to the statistics over 1000 others)
This will make an interesting conversation once she arrives back at Rumble's house.
She will probably tell him how wrong this is, and he will relent and let her out. Or not...
Somewhat wish the shop was just like the space time witch's shop in xxxHolic where it's always there but nobody notices it unless they need to be there but this should be great.
PS: Might want to search this chapter and the description for "rumble" with match case enabled. There's a few missed capitals around. Can't speak for the rest of the chapters though.
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Bigger issue is that Devils are Lawful Evil not Chaotic Evil like Discord also, no deals were really made.
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Maybe "A Gift From A Demon"? Demons are a Chaotic Evil parallel to Devils after all.
Hello? Anyone here? Is this story still alive, or abandoned and forgotten?
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Right. It's not the Devil. It's worse.
Remember to capitalize Rumble’s name.
I noticed a lot of missing periods in this chapter. I don’t want to point them all out.
It's a shame that this story is abandoned, still, I'm holding out hope that it will eventually come back...